Topic: Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Hi Huong, welcome to our forum. It would be great if you could tell us why you are preparing for the IELTS and what you want to study. As for your text, let’s start with "an advice" is wrong (some advice is correct) - #2 by Jamie_K

You probably mean ‘denied’ here?

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