Hi Luschen,
Since I’ve become acquainted to these kinds of TOEFL independent essays. I’ve practiced two different kinds of essays. If you have time, please have a look. Do you think the format is correct? If you have any suggestions, please let me know.
Here’s the link:
Can someone please rate this essay. I would be extremely grateful.
Q: Neighbours are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbour? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Good neighbours help each other even during thick and thin. But what are the cherished qualities that make a neighbour good? In my opinion, a friendly outlook, empathy and integrity are merits that make a neighbour virtuous.
For starters, a good neighbour should have a we…
I would really appreciate if someone could rate this essay.
Q: Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion.
In the past, families took care of their elderly members in their own homes; however, today, it is becoming more common for elderly people to go to nursing homes and other long-term care facilities. There are several advantages and disadvantages to…
Regards,
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