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Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. These days people, who are from different places from the world, live in many cities, which are named as cosmopolitan, in many countries. In which way the government can assure these people can lead their life responsivel…

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