Ielts writing task 1 _ tabke

[14122006]

Hello, I’m going to take the Ielts exam in June. I have just learned to write Ielts Academic Task 1. Can you help to correct my essay and give me my estimated band score? Thank you so much in advance.

The table below demonstrates how many barrels of oil produced per day in four countries: Nigeria, Chad, Congo and Somalia between 2000 and 2004.
Looking at the table, it is immediately obvious that there was an increase in daily oil production, with Chad witnessing the most dramatic rise, whereas the figures for Congo declined considerably.
The number of oil barrels produced daily in Chad started at 0 barrel per day (bpd) in 2005, after which it experienced a rise to 50,000 bpd in 2004. An opposite trend can be seen in Congo, with figures dropping from 275,000 bpd in 2000 to 203,000 bpd in 2004.
In Somalia, 5000 barrels of oil were produced on a daily basis in 2000, followed by a rise to 50,000 bpd in 2004. Meanwhile, Nigeria registered a figure of 205,000 barrels of oil per day in 2000, then a drop to 190,000 bpd in 2002 and a final increase to 213,000 bpd in 2004.

[Torsten]

The table below shows how many barrels of oil per day were produced in four countries: Nigeria, Chad, Congo and Somalia between 2000 and 2004.
It is immediately apparent from the table that daily oil production has increased, with Chad experiencing the largest increase, while the numbers for Congo decreased significantly.
The number of barrels of oil produced daily in Chad started at 0 barrels per day (bpd) in 2005 and then increased to 50,000 bpd in 2004. An opposite trend can be seen in Congo, where numbers declined from 275,000 barrels per day in 2000 to 203,000 barrels per day in 2004.
Somalia produced 5000 barrels of oil per day in 2000, followed by an increase to 50,000 bpd in 2004. Nigeria recorded daily production of 205,000 barrels of oil in 2000, then a decline to 190,000 bpd in 2002, and finally an increase to 213,000 bpd in 2004.