Hi everyone. I wonder your feedback and estimated band score

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Sure. What you can also do is read through the comments @Sumejja has made here:

Writing task 2 essay - I wonder your feedback and estimated Band Score according to current rating system. Also, I believe that this essay will help other people who prepare for IELTS exam

Hi everyone. I hope you are fine. I wrote this essay last night. I hope it can be beneficial for you. I am waiting for your feedback and estimated band score, too. @Torsten @tim_m @Sumejja [IMG_20200527_120501] It is generally thought that if women decide having a baby, they have to look after their children. Fathers are ignored about raising a child. I completely disagree this argument. First of all, father, who play a vital role in a family, considered to be a breadwinner in many countries…