GRE Argumnent Essay: The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company

Argument:
The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the president of Acme Publishing Company.

“Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees take the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity. One graduate of the course was able to read a 500-page report in only two hours; another graduate rose from an assistant manager to vice president of the company in under a year. Obviously, the faster you can read, the more information you can absorb in a single workday. Moreover, Easy Read would cost Acme only $500 per employee — a small price to pay when you consider the benefits. Included in this fee is a three-week seminar in Spruce City and a lifelong subscription to the Easy Read newsletter. Clearly, to improve overall productivity, Acme should require all of our employees to take the Easy Read course.”

Essay:
In the recommendation by the personnel director to the president of Acme publishing company, the director concludes that purchasing the easy reading course would significantly improve the productivity of it’s employees. However the director based his recommendation on the following three arguments, which if disproved, would weaken the validity of the report considerably.
Firstly, is reading a 500 page report in 2 hours a sign of productivity? It can be argued on a similar tone that it is a sign of mindless and lax reading. Maybe the employee skipped multiple parts from the report which would lead to him or her having an incomplete knowledge of the relevant details. As the saying the goes “half knowledge is more harmful than no knowledge”, such an employee can cause more loss to the company than if he hadn’t read the report at all. Maybe the employee is just going through the words of the report without really understanding the information the report sought to present. Such a practice, may lead to completing a report in 2 hours but won’t impart the relevant details to the employee and moreover would be a waste of valuable work-hours for the company.
Secondly, was the easy reading course the primary factor behind the steep rise of the graduate? It maybe the case that the graduate was naturally talented and went through the ranks of the company relying on his impressive performance and business acumen without even taking the course. In this case the easy reading course would have virtually no hand in the progress of the employee. Maybe the employee was related to a high ranking official in the company like a CEO or a director. A shrewd person in this case can also have a meteoric rise in the company by currying favours from his superiors owing to his relationship. If such a case be true, it would also disprove the relationship between the course and the productivity.
Finally, is 500 dollars really a small price to pay for the company? 500 dollars while may seem like a small price individually but will burgeon into a significant amount when taken into account for all the employees in the company. Is the company profitable enough to incur such a cost? Many small and intermediate companies starting out are strapped of cash and as such investing in such a scheme may spell doom for them in case the investment does not produce the desired results.
To conclude, it is possible that in accordance with the recommendations of the director, there may be a significant rise in the productivity of the employees, however the director needs to provide further information on the aforementioned points that is evidence regarding the fact the speed reading does not hinder information retention, evidence that the course is a major factor behind growth of the employees and evidence for the fact that company can incur such a cost. Failure to provide evidence on any of these arguments could render the inconsistent and damage it’s validity considerably.

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In the Human Resources Director’s recommendation to the President of Acme Publishing, the Director concludes that the purchase of the Easy Reading course would significantly increase employee productivity. However, the Director bases his recommendation on the following three arguments which, if refuted, would significantly weaken the strength of the report.
First, is reading a 500-page report in 2 hours a sign of productivity? Similarly, one could argue that it is a sign of thoughtless and lax reading. Perhaps the employee skipped several parts of the report, which would result in his or her incomplete knowledge of the relevant details. According to the adage “half-knowledge is more harmful than no knowledge,” such an employee may do more harm to the company than if he or she had not read the report at all. Perhaps the employee just skims the wording of the report without really understanding what information the report was trying to convey. Such a practice may result in a report being completed in 2 hours, but it does not convey the relevant details to the employee and would also be a waste of valuable man-hours for the company.
Second, was the light reading course the main reason for the graduate’s steep rise? Perhaps the graduate was naturally talented and worked his way up in the company based on his impressive performance and business acumen without taking the course. In this case, the reading course would have virtually no impact on the employee’s advancement. Perhaps the employee was related to a high-ranking official in the company, such as an executive or director. In this case, too, a shrewd person might experience meteoric advancement in the company by being favored by their superiors because of their relationship. If such a case were to apply, it would also disprove the link between stock price and productivity.
Finally, is $500 really a small price to pay for the company? While $500 may be a small price to pay for an individual, it becomes a significant amount when considered for all employees in the company. Is the company profitable enough to incur such costs? Many small and mid-sized businesses just starting out are strapped for cash, so investing in such a system can spell doom for them if the investment does not produce the desired results.
In summary, the director’s recommendations will potentially lead to a significant increase in employee productivity. However, the director must provide further information on the above points, i.e., evidence that speed reading does not impede information absorption, evidence that the course is an important factor in employee growth, and evidence that the company can incur such costs. Failure to provide evidence for any of these arguments could lead to inconsistencies and significantly impact the validity of the report.

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Thanks a lot! you articulated much better than me in fewer words. For some reason, I forget words like skim, adage and due to time constraints opt for a simpler way out. Your way looked so much more better.

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You are welcome :wink: By the way, welcome to the forum too…

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