Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Young people now a days play an important role in community. Young people are the most energetic people who help to evolve the planet in to better place to live both emotionally and physically. Some believe youth does not have enough time to help in their communities while others believe that youth plays a better role in shaping the communities in to better place. In my opinion Young people dedicating their valuable time to community by doing many environmental pollution prevention programs and also helping orphanage,old.
First, due to increase use of automobiles, industry and other substances that release smoke ,levels of application pollutions are increasing day by day. Necessary steps have been taken by youth in most of regions to prevent the harmful effects of these pollution. Some harmful effects of the pollution are greenhouse effect and global warming. For example, students in most of organizations have been taking active participation in revising the traditional methods of waste collection. Also, there has been increasing number of campaigns and awareness programs conducted all over the world in educating people about effects of pollution on health. Most emphasis has been laid down on energy production which produces less effects on environment. Increasing number of students started planting of trees in their colleges as well as their homes. Many educational institutions as an initiative motivated their students to participate in plantation of the tree saplings in the botanical gardens and some schools have made a requirement in their course curriculum that each student has to plant three trees in a semister atleast. Thus young people thorugh different chains giving their best effort to prevent pollution.
Second, Young people are doing an active participation in orphanages and old age homes. Though busy in academic works teenage population are interested in working for orphanages. They are collecting books, clothes, food, from active donors and distributing it to different organisations depending on demand of students from them. They also helping old age people by talking and discusion with them. For example, In my undergraduate days we were actively participating in helping poor people and orphans. We through support of our university started oraganisation called Samaaja samrakshak . The motive of that organisation is to collect money from different companies, landlords and there by using them for poor people education and also for their clothing.
In conclusion I can say grownup and teenage and youth all are actively participating in community activities. They are doing their best to prevent the society from harmful effects of pollution. Also, they are uplifting the education system by educating the poor and also trying to eliminate the poverty. Thus I totally disagree that young people do not have enough time to help in their communities.
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