Young people enjoy life than old. good day!

As advanced society, many entertainments industries and leisure facilities have increased rapidly. In this sense, many people can enjoy their free time more exciting than last period. Especially, young people spend a huge of time to joy their life than seniors. Because they have a healthy body and aspects of society, young people have less of responsibilities than elder.

To start with, most people recognize that young people are not only more substantial than elder regarding physical power, but also they have much of time for enjoying their youth. Moreover, economical and social fields support many tools and facilities to young people such as parties, clubs and goods in the downtown. For instance, at the downtown, elder people are restricted their behaviors due to fast moving and complicated streets. Beside, normally most old people are not strong as young people. From my experience, my grandfather was a man of great physical strength and like hiking in the mountains when he was younger. However, He cannot enjoy physical activities now due to his physical problem. As a result, young people enjoy their life than old people.

In addition, young people have less sense of responsibilities than senior, because they have fewer things they have to care for. It is clear that young people can behave easily and freely than old people. For example, when I was a university student, I did not care of surrounding status and I strived to experience a lot of things. However, after I graduated university, I had to get a job and should try to adapt social rules. Thus, enjoying life was no simple anymore as well as I realized that growing into adulthood has more responsibilities. Consequently, young people can enjoy their life than old people because they have a little mandatory.

In conclusion, young people have several advantages that they can enjoy their life than old people. As I have mentioned these points that physical health and responsibilities. However, young people must consider carefully how to use their time.

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As advanced society, many entertainments industries and leisure facilities have increased rapidly. In this sense, many people can enjoy their free time more exciting than last period. Especially, young people spend a huge of time to joy their life than seniors. Because they have a healthy body and aspects of society, young people have less of responsibilities than elder.

To start with, most people recognize that young people are not only more substantial than elder regarding physical power, but also they have much of time for enjoying their youth. Moreover, economical and social fields support many tools and facilities to young people such as parties, clubs and goods in the downtown. For instance, at the downtown, elder people are restricted their behaviors due to fast moving and complicated streets. Beside, normally most old people are not strong as young people. From my experience, my grandfather was a man of great physical strength and like hiking in the mountains when he was younger. However, He cannot enjoy physical activities now due to his physical problem. As a result, young people enjoy their life than old people.

In addition, young people have less sense of responsibilities than senior, because they have fewer things they have to care for. It is clear that young people can behave easily and freely than old people. For example, when I was a university student, I did not care of surrounding status and I strived to experience a lot of things. However, after I graduated university, I had to get a job and should try to adapt social rules. Thus, enjoying life was no simple anymore as well as I realized that growing into adulthood has more responsibilities. Consequently, young people can enjoy their life than old people because they have a little mandatory.

In conclusion, young people have several advantages that they can enjoy their life than old people. As I have mentioned these points that physical health and responsibilities. However, young people must consider carefully how to use their time.

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