You are like my hopes that fly drop by drop

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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You are like my hopes that fly drop by drop.

Could you check it please ?

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You are like my hopes that fly. The rest is not required.

You are like my hopes that fly, to join my dreams of you. ( Sounds great ) Good luck.

:smiley: :smiley: Kitosdad.

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How is this?

You are like my hopes that slide drop by drop

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Hi Volcano.
Maybe, you are like my hopes ( full of hope ) that lessen, drop by drop.