What is love?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
1

Hi,

Can you please point out my mistakes in the
following paragraph? ’

‘What is love? It makes some people laugh and
some people weep. You will find a lot of people
claiming to love someone, but most of them
don’t even know the definition of love. It is easy
to say that I’ll bring the moon and stars from the
sky for you. Love is not a game. Man could love
our God and His prophet first sand then our
parents.’’

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What is love? It makes some people laugh and some people weep. You will find a lot of people claiming to love someone, but most of them don’t even know the definition of love. It is easy to say, “I’ll bring the moon and stars from the sky for you”. Love is not a game. Man should love our God and His prophet first and then his parents.

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3

Thank you, BN.

I want to use ‘‘we’’ instead of ‘‘man’’

‘‘We should love our…’’

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In that case, use ‘our’ as your original.