The ceremony is held annually to show appreciation to the founder of X religion, remembering the persecution and challenges he faced and pledging to propagate the religion.
Could a fellow member please check for errors in the above text. Many thanks.
It’s not clear to me who is pledging to propagate the religion. Is it the founder or the ceremony participants?
The ceremony is held annually to show appreciation to the founder of X religion, remembering the persecution and challenges he faced and his pledge to propagate the religion.
The ceremony is held annually to show appreciation to the founder of X religion, remembering the persecution and challenges he faced. Participants are encouraged to pledge to propagate the religion.
The ceremony is held annually to express appreciation to the founder of X religion in remembrance of the persecution and challenges he faced while pledging to propagate the religion.