Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substances. A vegetarian diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
Vegetarianism is a practice where its followers eat mostly plant-based food. A vegetarian does not eat meat. Vegetarianism could be divided into five types, lacto-ovo vegetarians who eats dairy products and egg products ; ovo vegetarians who eats egg and meatless product; lacto- vegetarians who eats dairy products but no eggs and meats; vegan who eats only food from plant sources and lastly fruitarians who consume only fruits. From my point of view, there is advantage and also disadvantage of being a vegetarian although vegetarian foods could substitute all meat products for our daily food needs.
Vegetarian foods which only comprises vegetables, fruits , nuts and seeds would be able to provide sufficient nutrient for a vegetarian. For instance, many people think that most vegetarians are lacking of protein and iron and other important nutrients in their body. However, the fact that nuts contains relatively high amount of protein is still unknown. Other than that, being a vegetarian will also decrease the risk of getting heart attack and other few diseases as most of the vegetarian foods contains low amount of carbohydrates and fats compared to meat products.
If everyone supports vegetarianism, there will be a drastic drop in the poultry economy. Many countries such as India and New Zealand generates income by producing meat based or dairy based product. This countries economy will be affected badly and in many circumstances, quite a number of people would be jobless if every one is a pro of vegetarianism. A decrease in animal slaughtering for food purpose will also lead to ecological imbalance. Naturally, humans are predators and animals are prey. In order to achieve equilibrium in ecological system, humans must consume meat to overcome the over population of animals. On the other hand, if vegetarianism is widely accepted by human beings, it will result in high demand of vegetables and fruits. This is not possible and feasible because we don’t have enough land for agriculture .
In short, being a vegetarian has both advantage and disadvantage.
Thank you.
TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a bookstore sales clerk and a student
Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substances. A vegetarian diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
Vegetarianism is a practice where its followers eat mostly plant-based food. A vegetarian does not eat meat. Vegetarianism could be divided into five types, lacto-ovo vegetarians who eats dairy products and egg products ; ovo vegetarians who eats egg and meatless product; lacto- vegetarians who eats dairy products but no eggs and meats; vegan who eats only food from plant sources and lastly fruitarians who consume only fruits. From my point of view, there ARE advantageS and also disadvantageS IN being a vegetarian(,) although vegetarian foods could substitute all meat products for our daily food needs.
Vegetarian foods which only comprises vegetables, fruits , nuts and seeds would be able to provide sufficient nutrient for a vegetarian. For instance, many people think that most vegetarians are lacking IN protein and iron and other important nutrients in their bodIES. However, the fact that nuts contain relatively high amountS of protein is still unknown. Other than that, being a vegetarian will also decrease the risk of getting heart attack and other few diseases as most of the vegetarian foods contains low amountS of carbohydrates and fats compared to meat products.
If everyone supports vegetarianism, there will be a drastic drop in the poultry economy. Many countries such as India and New Zealand generate income by producing meat based or dairy based productS. ThESE countries economIES WOULD be affected badly and in many circumstances, quite a number of people would be jobless if every one is a pro of vegetarianism.
A decrease in animal slaughtering for food purpose will also lead to ecological imbalance. Naturally, humans are predators and animals are prey. In order to achieve equilibrium in THE ecological system, humans must consume meat to overcome the over population of animals. On the other hand, if vegetarianism is widely accepted by human beings, it will result in A highER demand FOR vegetables and fruits. This is not possible NOR feasible because we don’t have enough land for agriculture .
In short, being a vegetarian has both advantageS and disadvantageS.
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Excellent. 9/10
First of all, thanks for correcting my essay.
Thanks for your time.
Just want to know, is my point relevant?
How do you rate an essay?
By considering both points and grammar or grammar only?
Thank you. good day.
Hello Abirami, when I first started editing here I didn’t used to rate the work, but the students urged me to do so, so I marked out of ten, as my old teachers used to.
I judge each essay quite simply.
Has the topic been closely followed?
How long, and how well do I know the student?
Have they progressed over time?
Are they still making progress?
Finally, grammar, punctuation and sentence structure.
I am not a teacher, but I am a native-speaker. I am completely neutral in both my rating and comments. Sometimes students don’t like what I say, but they all get the truth … nothing else.
Many are often surprised at the high mark that they receive, but if I feel they are now resting on their laurels, then they get savaged. Others who think they are good, are soon awakened when I tell them they are not.
I love each and every one of you. I may appear at times to have favourites, but I try to be honest and fair. You get what you deserve, no more, no less.
Kitos.
That was a good one.
I always feel unsecured with my way of writing.
I do have a very bad experience.
For my last exam, I was unable to write about the topic.
So, i ended up handing in a blank paper.
well, my teacher didn’t scold me, she was quite understanding, However, I think If I want to appreciate
her, then I need to work little harder to overcome my nerves in exam as I am not a good test taker.
And I find this website is so helpful.
Thanks a lot.
Good day.
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