Use of 'when' in time clause


#1

Hi, what is the wrong with the following sentence?

When you have gone through the papers, kindly return them to us.

Pl. clarity
Souba73


#2

Hi, what is the wrong with the following sentence?


#3

Hi Torsen,
You are right. I am sorry for the mistake made inadvertently. But what about the actual/ 2nd Sentence.


#4

Your second sentence sounds fine to me. “After you have gone through the papers …” is also fine.