Neither of those sentences work well.
What day are you free?
or
When are you free on Monday?
ok, how to ask " when are you free in the day?’
What time are you free in the day? = Is it correct ?
What times are you free that day?
What times are you free each day?
might be better.
When are you free each day?
when are you free/ available in the day time ?
when do you get time in day?
are the above context correct ?
I dislike ‘when are you free each day?’ I think ‘What times are you free…’ is more precise. However, it is not incorrect.
The second sentence is okay other than the missing capital letter and the space error before the question mark.
The third sentence would need to be ‘When do you get time in the day?’
Ok ,
“when do you get time in the day?” In this context ‘the’ means particular day not any day, Right?
Not necessarily, depending on the context it could be generally in a usual day.
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there is no girl in the world for me
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there is no girl for me in the world
which is above mentionad correct ?
‘There is no girl in the world for me’ would be the most usual phrase, but both can be considered correct.
I do wonder if this is what you mean though. It indicates that no girl anywhere will suit you.
thanks for helping me
And yeah its true there is no girl in the world for me. No girl likes me
Would you make the following contexts seem natural. I have translated it from my language Into English.
- I have told you whatever was in my heart. It is up to you, You love me or not and it does not matter. What does matter is I love you. *
If necessary, you can add some your thoughts to them to seem naturall.
thanks
I have opened my heart to you and now it is up to you. Whether you love me or not doesn’t matter, what matters is that I love you.
Cheers my dears! Beeesneees
which of these is correct ?
Cheers my dears!
Cheers me dears!
Cheers m’ dears!
I’ve just check your post ‘Cheers m’ dears’ out. It was very helpful. thanks
Please make the following contextx seem natural.
Be careful. This road is very dangerous. Lots of accidents take place around here.
Is above context is correct ?
It’s okay, though I would use ‘happen’ rather than ‘take place’.
Thanks.
Then the following phrases would be correct .
Be careful. This place is very dangerous. Lots of strange things happen
Yes, if you included the final full stop. 
Also be careful not to leave a space before a full stop, comma, etc.
Thanks. My next question is
There is a rush at the temple since morning.
In this context what I am trying to say is there is a rush and it starts from morning. (please correct it also) Does above context seem right to you in this sense ?