unemployment and air polution

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I wiil talk about the problems of unemployment and air polution and their solution.

Actually, there are several problems which bluster our life, and every day it in increase. If we do not care about these problems, it will publishes most and most, therefore, we should find a solution for these dangerous problems. I think the two most dangerous problems which need necessary solution are unemployment and air polution. These phenomenons have the same influence in our life, I will mention the solutions below.

First, unemployment is an affective problem, because there are many people who suffer from this problem which sometimes makes people try to kill them selves because they did not find job which provide them money to pursue their natural life, and achieve their dreams. Every person speaks and discusses concerning this important problem in every place. In fact it has became a world issue, so, we must find solution.

I beleive that, the solution is in government hand. For instance, if the students graduated from the university, the government should give them little salary until they find job, or the government provide them an appropriate job even the do not become victim of unemployment.

Second problem, air polution has negative effect in our health and our children health, they are like the diamond which must protect them from diseses and every thing affects in their health. There are several ways to protect our selves from air polution.

First, the factories has a big role in cause of air polution by its smoke, so, we must reduce the factories in our environmemt. The factories should be far from the crowded and big cities, because most of people live in big cities.

Second cause of this phenomenon is, car’s smoke, car’s s smoke has negative effect in our health too, therefore, we must solve this problem by alter the traditional gas and use the alternative thing which do not cause the air polution.

To sum up, the government must take care about these significant problems, and find the most affictive solutions to solve them, because we want to live in peace and healthy environment.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a professor and her student

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I wiil talk about the problems of unemployment and air polution and their solution.

Actually, there are several problems which/bluster our life/DISTURB OUR LIVES, and every day it IS ON THE increase. If we do not care about these problems, it will publishes most and most INCREASE MORE AND MORE, therefore, we should find a solution for these dangerous problems. I think the two most dangerous problems which need necessary solutionS are unemployment and air polution. These phenomenons have the same influence in our life, I will mention the solutions below.

First, unemployment is A REAL problem, because there are SO many people who suffer from this problem(,) which sometimes makes people try to kill themselves because they CANNOT find A job which provideS them WITH ENOUGH money to pursue their natural life, and achieve their dreams. Every person speaks and discusses concerning this important problem in every place. In fact it has became a world issue, so, we must find A solution.

I belIEve that, the solution is in THE government’S handS. For instance, if the students graduated from the university, the government should give them A little salary until they find A job, or the government provide them WITH an appropriate job SO THAT theY do not become victimS of unemployment.

Second problem, air polLution has negative effectS ON our health and our children’S health(.) They are like diamondS which must BE protectED them from diseAses and everything THAT affects THEM in their health. There are several ways to protect our selves from air polLution.

First, the factories PLAY a big role in causING air polLution WITH its smoke, so, we must reduce the factories in our environmemt. The factories should be far from the crowded cities, because most of people live in big cities.

Second cause of this phenomenon is A cars EXHAUST(.) Cars moke has negative effectS on our health too, therefore, we must solve this problem by alterING the traditional FUEL and use the alternative thingS which do not cause the air polution.

To sum up, the government must take care about these significant problems, and find the most EFFECTIVE solutions to solve them, because we want to live in A peacFUL and healthy environment.
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You really MUST buy a dictionary Mona. If you already have one, then why aren’t you using it!
Not a good essay Mona, but it would have been better if you had bothered to spell the words correctly.

Kitos. 6.5/10

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Thank you very very very much Kitos, I will try to do best than this essay.

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