Topic: The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causi

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Topic: The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor countries but also for industrialized nations. Describes some of problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing a considerable number of problems not only for poor countries such as: food- lacking, education, unemployment but also for industrialized nations such as: services, pollution and unemployment, too. Therefore, the government of nations in the world is trying to solve this global problem.

Firstly, consequences that the uncontrolled population cause in poor countries are: food- lacking, education, unemployment. In fact, it is difficult for governments to provide enough food for all. In addition, the education for children can’t be ensured. Food- lacking and weak education will lead to unqualified workers generation, and consequently this cause the unemployment in most of big cities.

And secondly, there are different problems that the population explosion cause in rich nations, such as: services, pollution and unemployment. Nowadays, effective public services are essential requirements in developed cities. So when population increase, it is difficult for government to do that well. In addition, the pollution in big cities can’t be avoided. Furthermore, the growth of popultion lead to unemploment, causing series of social evils.

In my opinion, there are many ways for gorvernment of nations to solve this problem. But educating public awareness of overpopulation problems is the most important way. For example, the government should show consequences that overpopulation cause and have strong policies to control population, such as “two child policy” in Vietnam. Beside that, sex education course for teenagers in school is necessary. This will decrease partly unwanted pregnant in teenager. In addition, in Catholic countries, there are some laws to prevent child-bearing. [ My teacher told me that :D]

In conclusion, it is widely acknowledged that over population cause concerns about enviroment, living standard, social stability in both poor and rich coutries. Thus, all nations should gather and look for the best way to solve this global warning.

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