Topic: many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
As can be seen, many students are inclined to study abroad nowadays. Anyway, I think it is one of the good ways for students’ studying in our integrating age. Studying abroad is really good for students who want to widen and enhance their knowledge as well.
The most important reason I’d like to mention first is that studying abroad help students reach the high-quality education in some developed countries. You know, in many famous schools and universities on over the world there are enough school facilities and equipments with high-quality in order to make sure that students’ studying is the most effective. Practice after learning theory is highly appreciated. Therefore, oversea students may have more practical knowledge, and enhance their skills. Furthermore, the methods of studying outside their home countries are relatively different from ones in their home countries. Let me give you a specific reason: studying in universities requires the skill of working in group, self-studying. Students have to understand that studying is the main task of students not of the teachers. Hence, it helps to form independence in studying for all of students.
The second reason I support for my opinion is that studying abroad means approaching new languages, people and cultures. Living in a new environment opens us up to experimenting with different ways of doing things and widen our knowledge of variety of the world culture as well as the people. We can have experiences and try out different things. This gives us a chance to explore the world more than we could at home
Finally, we cannot forget that students after finish their studying can come back to construct their home countries. I think with knowledge and experience that they got from international schools, they can contribute to make their countries more prosperous.
Generally speaking, studying abroad is really a good way for students’ future and their success.
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Topic: many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
As can be seen, many students are inclined to study abroad nowadays. Anyway, I think it is one of the good ways for students’ studying in our integrating age. Studying abroad is really good for students who want to widen and enhance their knowledge as well.
The most important reason I’d like to mention first is that studying abroad helpS students reach the high-quality education in some developed countries. You know, in many famous schools and universities ALL over the world(,) there are enough school facilities and equipments OF high-quality in order to make sure that students’ studying is the most effective. PracticING after learning theory is highly appreciated. Therefore, oversea students may have more practical knowledge, and enhance their skills. Furthermore, the methods of studying outside their home countries are relatively different from ones in their home countries. Let me give you a specific reason: studying in universities requires the skill of working in group, AND self-studying. Students have to understand that studying is the main task of students not of the teachers. Hence, it helps to form independence in studying for all of students.
The second reason I support my opinion is that studying abroad means approaching new languages, people and cultures. Living in a new environment opens us up to experimenting with different ways of doing things(,) and widenS our knowledge of variety of the world culture(,) as well as the people. We can have experiences and try out different things. This gives us a chance to explore the world more than we could at home
Finally, we cannot forget that students after finishING their studying can come back to construct their home countries. I think with knowledge and experience that they GAINED from international schools, they can contribute to make their countries more prosperous.
Generally speaking, studying abroad is really a good way for students’ future and their success.
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Kitos. 8/10
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