People who start a university course but do not complete it should be fined.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe students who start an university course but do not complete it should be fined. In my opinion, students themselves have the right of decision of quitting a course according to the following reasons.
To begin with, students drop the course because they loose their interests and find something else better or more effective and valuable for their spent time. Studying under a credit-based policy, students themselves have the own right to choose which course or subject they want to take. However, they cannot ensure the course is beneficial, qualified or suitable for them or not until they really attend the classes. The goal of university education is to help students obtain some practical knowledge that they are interested in. In forcing students to attend some classes that are so boring or not attractive to them, they cannot be expected to study efficiently and effectively. When everything goes under their expectation, thus, student should have a right to drop the course without any extra fine as well.
On the other hand, students who register to an university course have to pay an amount of money for the it included in the tuition fee. Thus, when deciding to drop the course, they have already lost their money which is not so cheap according to the university tuition level nowdays. Moreover, by the time college students begin their university career, students are exposed to many new opportunities when they start university and they have to be responsible for their own decisions and behaviors. An extra fine in this circumstance, therefore, is not neccessary, reasonable and fair for the students.
In conclusion, completing a course is very neccessary and contructive for the academic performance and financial ability of a student. However, I believe that students who cannot finish an university course should not be fined because of the reasons mentioned above.
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