Here is my TOEFL response. Can anyone here show my my mistake or make some suggestions for a better expression in my response ?Thanks in advance.
what is your favorite sport ?
My favorite sport is soccer .
it’s my dream that one day i will become a famous soccer player.
when i was young , i would watch for hours soccer matches on T.V.
i would daydream about becoming a soccer legend .
everything about soccer seems so fascinating so possible to me.
Furthermore , i love soccer because playing soccer offers a great chance to make friends.
May be during the match we are competitors but after that we become good friends.
TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students in their dormitory during registration week