Topic 5: “ When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck is nothing to do with success.”
Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
My writing:
Anyone who has watched the way MU won the championship in 2006-2007 season can’t deny that luckiness played an extremely important role in their success. But luckiness doesn’t go to an incapable individual. So I do agree with the statement: “when people succeed, it is because of hard work and luck is nothing to do with success” for several reasons.
I can acclaim that hardly can anyone succeed without luck, but the most vital factor in their success is their hard-work. We can’t depend too much on luck beacause luck is god-given, we can’t choose or determine. Moreover, we aren’t be able to be lucky all the time. In other words, god doesn’t always support us. So if we do nothing but waiting for luck, we will have to receive failure.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that work-hard brings many good things to ourselves. There is a proverb saying that I like very much: “ No pain, no gain”, which usually encourages myself to try my best. At the first attempt, we can fail and the second time, so on, however, after a failure, we can get more and more experience, which is very useful for our future. For instance, I participated in a speaking contest last year and I was very confident that I would win the prize. In fact, I failed from the second round. Aftermath, I have drawn a lesson for myself : Don’t be overconfident, Just try your best. As a result, in the contest of this year, I’ve won the third prize.
One more example, let’s have a look at Italia football team at World Cup 2006 tournament. Their football system was in such a difficult condition at that time, nonetheless, they won the highest position the football field of the word. Was it just a luck? Nobody can agree with it, the achievement was the consequence of their hard-working. Because of their solidarity and ability, they deserved to achieve this success and luck played only a minor part in it.
In conclusion, luck is something that can help people to reach their goal but we shouldn’t base everything on it. Our fates are in our hands, therefore, all of us should try my best to succeed. Hard-work can help our dreams come true.
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