If you make that statement and follow it with solutions to encourage the learner, it will be highly appreciated.
You preceding posts are up to something. You have sorted points and stated why you cast doubt or appreciate the points made.
Thanks
Hi Richard
Thanks for correction.
I am afraid I do not get you.
I am simply appreciating your preceding posts.
Hope you get me now.
Best regards
Hello Richard,
I discussed the points of your essay with a close friend of mine. She didn’t seem to agree with the point you made about beauty and fertility after the age of thirty.
In my opinion, I think that girls get prettier after that age.
What’s your take on this?
Thank you.
Hello Richard!
Thank you for this excitement and comprehensive essay. I really like the way you’ve used to support your ideas about this issue. I agree in some aspects.
However, there’re some points that I totally disagree.
I personally believe that people do not get married when they achieve a certain age in their lives as you said, but when they think that they a ready to do this. A marriage requires conditions which are not related with age such as love for another, determination and
conviction that what you want to do is what you feel and desire. If you loof for someone who you think that you can live with her for ever, even when your are in age of thirty or forty you will be happy in your entirely life.
tomaSito
Hahaha…
Richard has raised an interesting argument.
The timing of getting married or being ready for marriage varies a lot from person to person. In my opinion, it’s really a controversial issue and we will never arrive at an ultimate answer.
Here I would like to mention some phenomena, such as feminism, celibacy, lesbian. People’s attitudes toward marriage have changed a lot with the passage the time.
According to some reports that the male population has been much more than the female population, and the increasing gap will lead to some huge social issues including the marriage crisis. The men are getting harder to find a mate in this century. Lucky for you all, guys.
Hello my friends
That was just an academic essay for English tests and it didn’t reflect my whole ideas and beliefs about that topic. I just tried to write an essay in English. I got a perfect score in this part…I’m gonna prepare to take another test of English.
Thanks for your comments.
Hi Richard, great essay
I hope you are fine, and I want to wish you a happy new year, I know for you is different but maybe you celebrate this year too 
I can see you have been studying hard and i’m sure like Kitos says, you will sail through this test
All the best.
Yamilet
Hi Tomasito
How you doing, and when is your test.
I can see you all have improved a lot and i’m very happy for you all
All the best and Happy New year,
Yamilet
Hello Yamilet! I’m fine, thank you.
Where have you been? I’ve never saw you since you took your test.
Hugs
I’m just studying to speak it, Yamilet. Happy new year for you too 