TOEFL essay: The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today...

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It is generally accepted that nothing is important than cooperation. Cooperating with each other, the chances are that people tend to easy to succeed. Some people consider that it is no need to cooperate in the past time because of the simple life, however, as far as I am concerned, cooperating is one of the most significant element in one’s whole life whenever in the past or in modern life.

Firstly, cooperation has a long history since people lived in groups. Like prehistoric people gathered to hunt to prevent animals from attacking them, also they have more opportunities to search for food in different areas. If they did not cooperate with each other, how could they survive for generations?

What’s more, thanks to the cooperation, the results are far reaching. Coming together is a beginning, keeping together is progress, working together is success. Such is remark made by Henry Ford. There is no doubt that the better cooperate with each other, the more knowledge and skills will obtain. A group of people who could bring different ideas and information to enhance the possibility to succeed. For example, in a advertisement company, there is routine that people have a brain storm in every conference, which would stimulate a various of ideas so that they make an excellent masterpiece for the public.

Last but not the least, cooperation is the result of social division of labor. It is obvious that the ability of an individual is such limited that he could not work efficiently. In order to make a living better , it is inevitable to cooperate with others. Indeed, in a group, one could learn more and do better when they work well with other people. You can find out the cooperation in every field, such as playing basketball, playing instruments in orchestra, even solving the global warming, all of which need teamwork. Therefore, cooperation plays an essential role in successive generation.

To sum up, human being cannot live without cooperation in any period. Even though the technology is enough advanced,it is impossible for people to live in the same circumstance.

This essay takes me a lot of time, I still do not feel satisfy with it. Kitos,I am expecting your opinion.

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Sue, and you will get it. Just going for a shower now. Be back in a few minutes.

Kitos.

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It is generally accepted that nothing is more important than cooperation. By cooperating with each other, the chances are that people tend to succeed more easily. Some people consider that there is no need to cooperate. However, as far as I am concerned, cooperating is one of the most significant element in one’s whole life.

Firstly, cooperation has been seen as a tradition ever since people lived in groups.
Prehistoric people gathered together to hunt, believing that to do so would deter animals from attacking them. Also they would have more opportunities to search for food in many areas. If they did not cooperate with each other, how could they survive for generations?

What’s more, thanks to the cooperation, the results will be far reaching. Coming together is a beginning, keeping together is progress, working together is success. Such is a remark made by Henry Ford. There is no doubt that the better we cooperate with each other, the more knowledge and skills we will amass. A group of people could combine different ideas and information, which would increase the probability of success.

For example, in an advertising company, there is a routine whereby people have a brain storming session in every conference, which generates a variety of ideas, and as a result they can make an excellent presentation to the public.

Last but not the least, cooperation is the result of a social division of labour.
It is obvious that the ability of an individual is so limited that he could not work efficiently. In order to make a better living environment, it is essential to cooperate with others. Indeed, in a group, one could learn more, and each would do better when they work well with other people.

You can find cooperation in every field, such as playing basketball, playing instruments in an orchestra, even solving the global warming problem, all of which need teamwork. Therefore, cooperation plays an essential role in each successive generation.

To sum up, human beings cannot live without cooperation in any period. Even though the technology is so far advanced,it is impossible for people to live in a not-cooperative environment.

Nice essay Sue, but still a way to go. I’ll be there for you.

Kitos.

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Admittedly, gasoline and electricity as basic power sources have not exhausted and being applied to daily life of human beings on a large scale. Frankly speaking, those resources are limited and the gases which are responsible for causing the greenhouse effect. There are some positive effects for protecting the energy such as gasoline and electricity when government boost the price of the energy, to some extent, this action will certainly restrain the consumption of the energy. I think, however, this is not the solitary way to protect the energy.
First, increasing the price will decrease the demand of the energy; in the meantime people will try hard to find substitutes. According to the Energy Outlook Report in 2030 of Exxon Mobil Corporation, the development of the economy and population growth drive the growth of the energy, and it predicts that the global energy growth is expected as 60% during 2000—2030. To over use the gasoline and electricity will cause greenhouse effect, the environmental pollution and the destruction of ozone layer. The price control of the energy will enhance people’s awareness of energy saving, and reduce the unnecessary energy consumption. For example, most people will take buses instead of private cars.
Energy resource is one of the significant raw materials for production, increasing the price of the energy intend to increase the production cost. In the general view is that, high oil prices generate the deduction of growth potential, inflation and high unemployment. To take air transportation for instance, numerous people cannot abide by the high ticket price, they diminish out plans, at the same time, Airline Company cut down the numbers of flights, revenue and expenditure, however, cannot be balanced, they have no choice but lay off the employees.
As far as I am concerned, there are scours of advantages and disadvantages in increasing the price of the energy, and it is not only the useful method to secure the energy. Society can seek actively alternative products, clean energy, such as wind energy, hydraulic energy, solar energy to release the pressure of the gasoline and electricity.
this is my first time join here, Kitos, I expecte your opinions. Thank you.

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Elaine, please ensure that you start a new posting with each of your essays. By posting at the foot of another’s work you risk the danger of being overlooked …OK?

CLEARLY, gasoline and electricity, as basic power sources, have not BEEN exhausted and ARE STILL being applied to THE daily life of human beings on a large scale.

Frankly speaking, those resources are limited and the gases BEING PRODUCED IN THEIR USE are responsible for causing the greenhouse effect.
There are some positive effects for protecting the USE OF SUCH energy when government boost the price of the energy, to some extent, this action will certainly restrain the consumption of THESE RESOURCES.

I think, however, this is not the ONLY way to REDUCE DEMAND.
First, increasing the price will decrease the demand FOR energy, AND in the meantime people will try hard to find substitutes FOR IT.

According to the Energy Outlook Report in 2030 of Exxon Mobil Corporation, the development of the economy and population growth drive the USAGE of energy, and it predicts that the global energy growth is expected as 60% during 2000—2030.

To overuse gasoline and electricity will cause A greenhouse effect, ALSO environmental pollution and the destruction of THE ozone layer.

The price control of energy will enhance people’s awareness of energy saving, and reduce the unnecessary energy consumption.
For example, most people will take buses instead of USINGprivate cars.

Energy resourceS ARE the significant raw materials for production, increasing the price of the energy TENDS to increase the production cost.

THE general view is that, high oil prices generate the Reduction of growth potential, INCREASE inflation and ARE ONE OF THE CAUSES OF high unemployment.

To take air transportation AS AN EXAMPLE, numerous people cannot AFFORD the high ticket priceS, at the same time, Airline CompanIES REDUCE the numbers of flights. Revenue and expenditure however cannot be balanced, AND THE AIRLINE have no ALTERNATIVE but TO lay-off employees.
As far as I am concerned, there are SCORES of advantages and disadvantages in increasing the price of the energy, but it is not the only the useful method of conseving energy.

Society can, AND SHOULD, actively seek alternative products. Clean energy, such as wind energy, hydraulic energy and solar energy should be utilised to EASE the increasing pressure of gasoline and electricity DEMANDS

A good first essay Elaine. Keep it up.

Kitos.

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Sorry to post there,because I do not know where to post a new one. Thank you for your answers.

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Hi Ealine
You can post it here:
english-test.net/forum/forum16.html
click on “new topic”, write your essay there and then post it to the forum.
Best of luck.