Here is my new essay. Actually, I’m not very confident with this one because before I often think that it is more important to study Maths and Science as my father said. I find this one a little bit out of my way of thinking. Please check it for me. Thank you.
Essay topic 124: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study History and Literature that it is for them to study Science and Mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Studying History and Literature is as important as studying Mathematics and Sciences. All of them support our life as a mental gift or a good living skill. History and Literature help us to relax after a hard-working day, fill our heart with valuable feelings and attitudes towards life while Math and Sciences help us work more efficiently and quickly as our brain are stimulate to do so.
Since History and Literature are traditional subjects for students to learn, especially in the Eastern country, they used to be considered as more important than Math and Sciences, which are new subjects if compared to their history. We agree that Literature makes our life more comfortable while our soul can walking through some stories, poems to relax and find ourselves in another world which is far from the crowded and noisy one we are living in. History reminds us of the past with a lot of memorable events; you should never forget the past because without the past, there is nothing for the present. However, our world is changing to be more and more modern and comfortable, technology is inevitable to us. Therefore, Math and Sciences become the main subjects at school and universities as History and Literature.
Working with a lot of equations, problems in Math and Sciences makes you become more sensitive to solve some cases in real life. For example, when you buy things in the market, sometimes you have to bargain for a lower price. It seems to be a little math problem now if you recall your memory and it will be easy for you to solve it because you have practiced a lot. Math and Sciences are also necessary for some special careers like accountancy, marketing, business management which play an important role in our life. Actually, they are required to study at the universities if it related to your main field for the purpose of supporting you in working more effectively in the future.
History, Literature and Math, Sciences are necessary to our life. Therefore, we should put them in the same rank of importance.
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Here is my new essay. Actually, I’m not very confident with this one because before I often think that it is more important to study Maths and Science as my father said. I find this one a little bit out of my way of thinking. Please
Studying History and Literature is as important as studying Mathematics and Sciences. All of them support our LIVES as a mental gift or AS a good living skill. History and Literature help us to relax after a hard-working day, fill our heartS with valuable feelings and attitudes towards life while Math and Sciences help us work more efficiently and quickly as our brainS are stimulateD to do IN DOING so.
Since History and Literature are traditional subjects for students to learn, especially in the Eastern countrIES WHERE they used to be considered as more important than Math and Sciences, which are new subjects if WHEN compared to their history.
We agree that Literature makes our life more comfortable while our soul can walking STROLL through some stories, poems to relax and find ourselves in another world which is far from the crowdedED and noisy one we are living in.
History reminds us of the past with a lot of memorable events; you should never forget the past because without the past, there is nothing for the present.
However, our world is changing to be BECOMING more and more modern and comfortable, technology is inevitable to us.
Therefore, Math and Sciences become the main subjects at school and universities as COMPARED TO History and Literature.
Working with a lot of equations AND problems in Math and Sciences makes you become more sensitive to solve some cases in real life. For example, when you buy things in the market, sometimes you have to bargain for a lower price. It seems to be a little math problem. Now if you recall /ACTIVATE/SUMMON/your memory and it will be easy for you to solve it because you have practiced a lot.
Math and Science are also necessary for some special careers like accountancy, marketing, business management; ALL OF which play an important role in our LIVES. Actually, they are required to study ESSENTIAL TO YOUR STUDIES at the universitY if THEY ARE related to your main field for the purpose of supporting you in working more effectively in the future.
History, Literature and Math, Sciences are necessary to our life. Therefore, we should put them in the same rank of importance.
Not bad, but very limited opinion and examples. As you stated at the outset, this was not a topic you enjoyed writing about.
Kitos 6/10
Thank you, Kitos. Maybe it’s better for me to cover some more information about this topic and rewrite it to have a better result.
Good afternoon LE, you might find my post, “Still making mistakes?” helpful when outlining your text.
Kitos.
I’ve found your post. It’s very helpful. Thank you.
Glad you found it helped.