TOEFL essay: Should Boys and girls attend separate schools

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A lot of parents have come across a dilemma that whether they should send their children to separate schools. Some people may prefer single-sex schools. However I definitely believe that co-educational schools are better because they create a desirable environment where students can communicate with the opposite sex, develop a well-rounded character and the cost of education will be cut as well.

First, by attending a co-educational school, it is easy for boys and girls to communicate with each other and develop the ability of cooperation. As we know, the main purpose of education is to lay the foundation for students before they enter society. Therefore schools should provide an environment which looks like our real life in which communication and cooperation skills are highly valued. On the contrary, in a single-sex school, students will lose the opportunity to talk with the opposite sex. In the future, they may find themselves hard to get along with the opposite sex, not to mention making cooperation.

In addition, interaction is helpful to shape a well-rounded character. It is well known that there are distinctions between sexes. Boys can learn consideration and flexibility from girls while teaching them braveness and fortitude. Otherwise, boys may be more accustomed to solve problems in violent ways. Meanwhile girls may turn to be more fragile,hardly facing frustrations.

What’s more, co-education is not only valuable from the sociological aspect, it also can save money and resources. For instance, if the authorities want to build separated schools, they need to double their inputs such as more land, more related facilities as well as more staffs. Perhaps it’s not a serious problem for rich nations, but how about thinking of some poor African countries? I cannot figure out the necessity to build separated schools in some impoverished nations or regions.

To sum up, in order to improve communication, shape character and save money, I strongly believe that boys and girls should attend the same school.Sure, I don’t deny that teachers should take specific methods to different sexes. However when we come to the true meaning of education, people should put that how well students will adapt to society and to what extent they will improve their personalities in the first place.

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A lot of parents have come across a dilemma that AS TO whether they should send their children to separate schools. Some people may prefer single-sex schools. However I definitely believe that co-educational schools are better because they create a desirable environment where students can communicate with the opposite sex, develop a well-rounded character and the cost of education will be cut as well.

First, by attending a co-educational school, it is easy for boys and girls to communicate with each other, and develop the ability of TO cooperatE. As we know, the main purpose of education is to lay the foundation for students before they enter society. Therefore schools should provide an environment which looks like our real life, in which communication and cooperation skills are highly valued. On the contrary, in a single-sex school, students will lose the opportunity to talk with the opposite sex. In the future, they may find themselves hard to get along with the opposite sex, not to mention making cooperation.THEIR HAVING AN INABILITY TO COOPERATE.

In addition, interaction is helpful to shape a well-rounded character. It is well known that there are distinctions between sexes. Boys can learn consideration and flexibility from girls while teaching them braveness and fortitude. Otherwise, boys may be more accustomed to solve problems in MORE violent ways. Meanwhile girls may turn to be more fragile, hardly EVER facing frustrations.

What’s more, co-education is not only valuable from the sociological aspect, it also can save money and resources. For instance, if the authorities want to build separate schools, they need to double their inputs such as more land, more related facilities as well as more staff. Perhaps it’s not a serious problem for rich nations, but how about thinking of some poor African countries? I cannot figure out the necessity to build separate schools in some impoverished nations or regions.

To sum up, in order to improve communication, shape character and save money, I strongly believe that boys and girls should attend the same school.Sure, I DO NOT deny that teachers should take specific ATTITUDES toWARD different sexes. However when we come to the true meaning of education, people should CONSIDER how well students will adapt to society and to what extent they will improve their personalities in the first place.
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A really well written essay Faye. You are very obviously highly intelligent.

Kitos. 9/10

Thank you so much, Kitos.
Thanks to the advice from you in the last essay,so this time I really composed and revised carefully in case of any careless mistakes in vocabulary or sth like that.
However I still have two questions. The first is that I find it’s hard to finish my essay within 30 minutes. When I tried to speed up my writing, it caused many mistakes (in vocabulary, grammar, poor sentences etc). How could I combine the accuracy and speed? Writing more?
The other question is that when I wrote the sentences like"Boys can learn consideration and flexibility from girls while teaching them braveness and fortitude.",to be honest I’m a little worried. Does that look like a little extreme? I mean someone may say boys can also be considerable as brave to girls even in separate schools. I try to make my essay objective because I do not know whether it will effect readers’ impressions.

Not at all Faye. This work is simply practise, and you are stating your honest opinion.It is only an opinion which you are open to change any-time.

ok, I see. Thanks, Kitos. I will keep expressing my honest opinions.

Good afternoon Faye,
Your strongly analytical opinions are so precious that everyone would desire to have. A wonderful essay Faye.

Hi, Hieutele. Thanks for your comment~~
I just found this site yesterday, I like here and love to communicate and share ideas with people here~~

hey faye,this essay is well written.I am struggling a lot in learning english,it would be so nice of you,if you suggested me in improving english.

Hi, Lad, it’s nice to see your comment.
I think this site is a wonderful place to improve English. You can upload your essays in this forum and I would love to offer some suggestions. Besides I am also new here maybe there are many other resources about listening, reading and speaking in the site.

thanks for reply faye,
i will do post essays here.

good work.