I am new to this forum. Could you kindly correct my essay as soon as possible? It would be very nice, because I am going to take the Toefl on next Friday already…
To be honest, I have some difficulties with the definition of the word “community”… Could you possibly explain it to me?
Thank you in advance!!!
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support ro oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Many companies which business goes on successfully, often wish to expand it in order to increase their profit. Due to this fact they build new factories and head quarters in their own country as well as in foreign countries.
To begin with I would like to state that such decisions have great affect on social and economic situation in regions where the expandation takes place. On the one hand, companies solve the problem of unemployment in this way by offering more jobs, which evolve firstly from employing workers to build a factory and secondly from employing office workers for the factory when it is built. Consequetly, it increases the economic situation in the country. Moreover, it positively influences social contacts between people who learn each other when they work together.
Nevertheless, on the other hand, a community which lives or works next to the future factory is negatively influenced by this building. In my opinion, there are to many disadvantages, which disturb the daily life of the community.
First of all, the building of the factory cost much time. It means for the community that it must count on loudness, which will take a very long period. So, people cannot concentrate on their work, are getting nervos and overstressed, which influence their day in a bad way. What happens next is the luck of motivation and the excess of people who are getting ill because of loudness and environment pollution.
A positive factor for the community is the fact that it recieves many new members, after the factory has been build. But such projects take years and all this time members of the community have to suffer under all the negative aspects I have listed before.
In conclusion I would like to put a stress on the environment pollution caused by new factories. Actually, there are too much factories over the world, which produce same products although there are no need of them.
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