"No one should marry before the age of 30. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Why (not)? [i]
In the modern life, the way people think about marriage is changing. In fact, we are focusing on working hard to have a good job, a good position that are all called a good base to have a happy family in the future. Hence, we don’t care about the time or age we’ll marry. Thus, it is said that we should not marry before the age of 30. For me, this statement is partly right for some reasons.
The point I disagree with this statement is that if you are female you should marry before you are 30 years old. This can be explained that it is not good for woman to have a baby after the age of 30. The scientific research shows that it will badly affect the children in the future if their mothers are pregnant at the age more than 25.
In contrast, if you are male I think it is a good advice because of the two reasons. Firstly, I think 30 years old is not enough for you to be mature to have a happy family. The more time you deal with the problems in your single life will help you deal with your family life later. Secondly, with general assumption that you graduate at 22 years old then 8 years later is a good time for you to create your own assets before marrying someone.
To sum up, this statement is a good advice for men but not a good idea for women. However, if you are a mature man and have a successful life, you can marry whenever you want. Therefore, it is not really important issue that whether you marry before or after the age of 30. The problem is that would you ensure that you could have a happy family with all you are having now or not.
There is not much I could comment (read – criticize) here
The essay is very well thought and written. You could also make it more generic by mentioning the way things are changing. Many couples now prefer to live together before marriage. So, in that case, there is no such thing as late or early.
Living eight years of solitude does not bring any good. More than career, what is more important in life is to understand someone closely and be able to put up with (or make your mind to put up with ;)) himher for the whole life.
(Today) the way people think about marriage is changing. In fact,we are focusing on working hard to (ensure our gaining) a good job and a good position.
These assure us of (establishing) a good base to have a happy family in the future. Hence, we don’t care about the time or age (that) we’ll marry.
Thus, it is said that we should not marry before the age of 30. For me, this statement is partly right for some reasons.
The point I disagree with (in) this statement is that if you are female you should marry before you are 30 years old. This can be explained (by saying) that it is not good for (a) woman to have a baby after the age of 30. (S)cientific research shows that it will badly affect children in the future if their mothers are pregnant at (a later age than 25).
In contrast, if you are male, I think it is good advice because of the(se) two reasons.
Firstly, I think 30 years old is not (old) enough for you to be mature (enough)to have a happy family.
The more time you (take to) deal with the problems in your single life, ( the more it) will help you deal with your family (in later life.)
Secondly, with (a) general assumption that you graduate at 22 years old, then 8 years later is a good time for you to (have acquired)) your own assets before marrying someone.
To sum up, this statement (can be taken as) good advice for men but not a good idea for women. However, if you are a mature man and have a successful life, you can marry whenever you want.
I find this tip very useful, I just corrected myself where I mistakenly wrote – “they had been told to…” instead of “they were told to…”.
For sure, we take the role of the reader when we revisit our writing after some time.
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