[b]Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Give suitable examples and reasons to support your answer.
I agree with the following statement that is always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. According to my nature honesty is the most important part in any relation. I would like to say not only honesty there are many things which are also important as well like love, sacrifices, adjustment etc. But honesty is the most important. There are many examples. These are giving below.
Firstly, I would like to say on the earth at each and every step of life, we face many people and make different types of relationship. For instance, in professional life if we want to make relationship with other people we will have to leave a good impression. This impression will come when we honest towards our work and people. If tell a lie first everyone believe on us but as they come to know they will never trust us and do not like to talk to us.
Secondly, in my opinion telling truth is also important at home. If parents are honest towards their children then automatically kids tell truth. Parents are the model for the kids. If children are in the habit of honesty then at school they never hide the truth. In this way they will get good friends and love of their teachers. If we have love in the family even then any time we will tell a lie it hurts family members. So next time they do not believe on you. In married life honesty is most important key to get success. If husband and wife have love, they adjust for each others and sacrifices at many stapes of life but they are not honest. When they come to know for this hurts them. Once you hurt your life partner then it is very difficult to believe next time.
Finally, I would like to say honesty is the most important part of any relation. For maintain a relation first we have to be honest for that.
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The following is my rewriting of your essay:
I agree with the following statement that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Although there are many things which are important to us such as love, sacrifices, adjustment etc, in my opinion, honesty is the most important thing. There are many examples to justify my opinion, which will be given below.
Firstly, I would like to say on the earth at every step of life, we face many people and make different types of relationship. For instance, in professional life if we want to make relationship with other people we will have to leave a good impression. This impression will come when we become honest towards our work and people. If you tell a lie, at first people may believe us; but if they get to know the truth finally, they will never trust us and will never like to talk to us.
Secondly, in my opinion telling truth is also important at home. If parents are honest towards their children, then automatically kids will tell truth. Parents are the model for the kids. If children are in the habit of being honest, then at school they will never hide the truth. In this way they will make good friends and their teachers will love them. But even If we have love in the family, we should also be honesty. Even lying to family members will hurt them, and the consequence is that next time they will not believe you. In married life, honesty is the most important key to success.
Finally, honesty is the most important part in any relationship. To maintain a close relation, first we have to be honest.
The truths and lies take enormous parts of our lives. So is telling the truth all the time necessary or sometimes is it unnecessarily eroding in any kind of relationship? Some may think it is not a big deal to say white lies from time to time but I disagree with that idea since I believe the most important factor that makes relationship concrete is telling each other the truths.
To begin with, telling the truth is one most important agents that build up trustworthiness between people. It is something that we commonly witness that people are being hypocrite more and more nowadays as the competition levels rising. Thus people become more cautious about choosing friends and they want them to be someone that they could easily count on. The truth-telling is coming into play and giving an idea about personalities and what the possible future friendship is going to be alike. The doctors who always tell the truth no matter what at the hospital I am working, have the best relationship with their patients and even more, the patient compliances are much higher in those relationships. It does not only construct the relationship but also makes it beneficial to the patients’ health.
What’s more, telling the truth is an important determinant for people to have respect and value each other. Lately, people are more prone to lose temper and behave disrespectfully to one another. That’s one of the most important reasons why we should care about respect. As telling the truth and respect are closely related to each other, respect is going to appear easily between people once people are honest and tell the truth to each other.
In conclusion, although many believe that white lies are not as damaging as they’re thought to be, I think that most things that created after much effort between people shouldn’t be jeopardized for just tiny little things called white lies. I strongly believe that telling the truth plays a leading role in structuring a strong relationship between people.