I disagree with this opinion that an uneducated person has nothing to teach an educated person. I believe that we cannot learn important skills of life just from books. Uneducated person can teach us some important skills that are important at our job and in society. They can give us a different point of view.
An uneducated person can give us some important skills that can be so useful in our job. Uneducated persons do not spend time in college and universities, so they spend this time to get experience at work. Sometimes, their experiences are resulted of the training of an educated person, so they work based on scientific rules although they do not know themselves. Therefore, we can learn from them how to use our theory knowledge in reality.
In addition, an uneducated person can teach us some important social behavior. For example, an uneducated person spend more time in society and work with different people, so he has more experiences about how to behave with different people.
Finally, an uneducated person can give us a different point of view. For example, an educated person can have valuable comments about some political news. For example, maybe an educated person is interested in political issues, so he follows the news about that carefully. Therefore, he maybe pay attention to something that we do not attention.
In conclusion, I believe that some important skills can not earn from books and going to college. Some important skills that are required for our jobs, for getting along with people can earn only by experience. Also, we can acquire different point of view from the people who are living around of us. I does not matter they are educated or not.
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I disagree with this opinion that an uneducated person has nothing to teach an educated person. I believe that we cannot learn important skills of life just from books. Uneducated person PEOPLE can teach us some important skills that are important FOR our job and in society. They can give us a different point of view.
An uneducated person can give us some important skills that can be so useful in our job.
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Uneducated persons do not spend time in college and universities, so they spend this time to get GAINING experience at work. Sometimes, their experiences are THE resulted of the training of an educated person, so they work based on scientific rules(,) although they do not know THEM themselves. Therefore, we can learn from them how to use our theory knowledge in reality.
In addition, an uneducated person can teach us some important social behavior. For example, an uneducated person spendS more time in society and workS with different people, so he has more experiences about how to behave with different people.
Finally, an uneducated person can give us a different point of view. For example, an educated person can have valuable comments about some political news. For example, maybe an educated person is interested in political issues, so he follows the news about that carefully. Therefore, he maybe pay PARTICULAR attention to something that we do not attention. WE ARE NOT INTERESTED IN.
In conclusion, I believe that some important skills (cannot-ONE WORD) BE LearnT from READING books and SIMPLY going to college. Some important skills that are required for our jobs AND for getting along with people can BE LearnT only by experience. Also, We can acquire different pointS of view from the people who are living around of us. IT does not matter WHETHER they are educated or not.
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Good evening Shmim. You did your best with this. You need to ensure that you review your work closely before posting it, and NEVER hurry through your conclusion. This is the most important part of your essay.
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Thank you very much. You are right, but my problem is always time. In TOEFL exam I have limited time, I want to arrange my time like this and know my grade in that time. But, I have to keep some minutes at the end to review my essay carefully.
Thank you so much for your helpful notification.