Hello,
Could you correct this title , please?
“Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling System”
Hi Sultano
Though it’s a bit of a mouthful, why not write:
Passport Administration Scheduling System Demo
That sounds less awkward to me than the longer version of the title. Despite the fact that ‘demo’ is more informal than ‘demonstration’, it is frequently used even in business settings.
If you decide you like the longer, more formal version better, then you should use ‘of’ rather than ‘for’ – assuming that the demonstration is a type of presentation of the system, that is.
Amy