This would never be Aired

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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_This will Never Be Aired in any French Channels nor in any Western Media. Even Women Were Harassed and Beaten Up … if this Happened in HK or Any Parts of China, it Will Be Shown Over and Over and Over Again By CNN,BBC AND WESTERN GOVT CONTROL MEDIA NEWS AND TV NEWS

In the first sentence, should “This would Never Be Aired…” be said instead? And should it be “or” instead of “nor”?

Thanks.

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This will never be shown on any French channel or any Western media. Even women were harassed and beaten up … if this happened in HK or any parts of China, it will be shown over and over again by CNN, BBC and WESTERN GOVT CONTROL MEDIA NEWS and TV NEWS.

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I think both instances of will should be would. The tense should match the rest of the paragraph.

This would Never Be Aired in any French Channels nor in any Western Media. Even Women Were Harassed and Beaten Up … if this Happened in HK or Any Parts of China, it Would Be Shown Over and Over

It’s possible for this to be written in a predictive future tense. But that doesn’t appear to be the intent.

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