I think trying is accepted in every place and among anyone too. So, I sometimes say some sight-read sentences and one of them is “No one will or did never fail in his/her lifetime”. It has I think an obvious meaning, but my face speaking to someone who believe never fail or failed in life. Great and famous scientists like Abu Ali Sina (Ebne Sina), an Iranian past scientists, whenever he was trying to find something or doing, and was confused, he just got up and prayed God. Then he would understand better, and said in his books that doing it will give you more understanding and God will help too.
I failed a lot, like in exams which are the most obvious ones, or in driving license that got 6 times to pass its driving city exam. Or in the world, when Barcelona FC soccer team loses one in a blue moon, they never take out their hand from trying and will get experience from that lose and won’t do its negative points in the future and cover it. And also they say if you don’t support us when we lose, don’t support us when we win. It means if you are our fan, you should tolerate our lose and we will try again to win in the next match. And we will also get moral from your comments everywhere, whether it’s good or bad.
In conclusion, just try, try and try. An Iranian expression says “If you wait, you will get sweet from salty”.
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