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The government would have to act judiciously more teen-agers smoke if they are not exposed to tobacco advertising than if they are and in a balanced manner to tide over the present crisis in puoltry sector.
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Although it rained all week, parts of the highway were flooded.
Is this a correct sentence?
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is not correct. I can’t begin to make sense of it.
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‘Although’ does not work there, as it implies that phrase b is contrary to what happened in phrase a.
This would be plausible:
Although it rained all week, the highway remained passable and there was no flooding.
In your svcenario:
As it rained all week, parts of the highway were flooded.
The government would have to act judiciously. More teen-agers smoke if they are not exposed to tobacco advertising than if they are and in a balanced manner to tide over the present crisis in poultry sector.
Does it make any kind of sense now?
Can I replace ‘as’ [color=red]by/with ‘after’?
Which one is correct at the red part?
No, this is the part that doesn’t make any sense:
and in a balanced manner to tide over the present crisis in poultry sector.
You could say ‘after it rained all week’ trhough the sentence changes in meaning slightly. It becomes a simple cause and effect statement (A caused B) rather than an explanatory reason for the flooding.