The effect of workaholic’s lifestyle

The busy life put people in many pressures that make people stressful and most of them become workaholics. This is the symptom that people are addicted to work, they don’t actually enjoy the work, it can imply that they simply feel compelled to do it. Their families, their social life and their health are the main aspects that are influenced by this lifestyle.
First and foremost, workaholics adversely affect their families. They will have weak communication with other family members. This can make the relationship in family stressful and likely collapse anytime. In addition, they have little help with housework because of focusing on their work; the family will be in disorder and cause uncomfortable feeling. However, the most negative effect of this style is on their education. Children have development incompletely about body and spirit, they need taking care more from others, especially their parents while the workaholic’s lifestyle gains much time and the father or mother will have no time remaining to care about their son. As a result, their kids may be naughty, lazy or their ability will not develop and their future will be influenced very much.
In addition to negative effect on family, workaholic can have numerous effects on their social lives. When people addict to work, they will have no attention to other things around them. They are losing relationships among their relatives and friends and partners. Therefore, they will face many difficulties in life because they have no help from others. Furthermore, in society, they also have few friends because of little communication with people in society. They concentrate on their work and don’t take part in some social activities or make friends together; this will cause their spirit poor, unhappy and bored.
The additional problem of workaholic’s style is some influences on their own health. When they work too much, they will not avoid stress and some diseases like headache, stomachache or some serious professional diseases that take much time to treat. According to the report about the health condition of worker publish by the organization of ones; there are about 90 percent of employees who is working hard suffering from the diseases like headache, feeling dizzy or stressful, etc. Moreover, they can have inefficient performance at work because of these diseases. For instance, when you study many subjects, you cannot understand thoroughly each subject. It is similar to the workaholic; they do much work and cannot have an efficient presentation at their job.
In short, workaholic’s lifestyle has many unhelpful effects on families, social lives and health. We must have suitable schedules in work and rest to keep equilibrium of our body and mind to stay away from this negative lifestyle. If workaholic can be cured, it is the best for their families and surrounding people

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Good morning Lehongthang.This is poorly written.
Although you appear to have a good vocabulary, your sentence structure and form of tenses is not good.
Your really need to do more reading. Read the highly scored essays on this thread. This will give you a good idea of where you are going wrong.


Thanks for your advices Kito. I will try my best

advice :slight_smile: