The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Both the chart and the line graph illustrate the data of coco-cola sales percentage in 2000 and it share price over a 6 years.
From the chart we see that the size of sales varied remarkably. Latin America and Europe were fairly similar in their maketings at 25.7% and 25.5% respectively. The greatest markets were counted for north America which constituted 30% of the total. Conversely, the lowest sales of coca cola were in Africa and middle east at only 7% of the whole sum. While Asia comprised half of north America sales at 16.4%.
When it comes to the graph, we clearly see that the shares started rising from the beginning of the course in 1996, but it tumbled slightly in the mid of the following year, to reach 57, then it peaked at 80% in 1998, after that it had an unstable level of fluctuation till 2000, finally it followed by a little increase and a fall.
To sum up, we figure out that there were some differences either in the coca cola share and in the sales it substantially differed according to the county and the year.
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Good afternoon and thanks for reviewing my work Kitos.
Please kitos can assess this chart.
Both the chart and the line graph illustrate the data of Coco-Cola sales percentage in 2000, and itS share price over a 6 year PERIOD.
From the chart we CAN see that the AMOUNT of sales varied remarkably. Latin America and Europe were fairly similar in their maRketings at 25.7% and 25.5% respectively. The greatest markets were /counted for/THOSE OF/ North America which constituted 30% of the total. Conversely, the lowest sales of Coca Cola were in Africa and THE Middle East at only 7% of the whole sum. While Asia comprised half of North AmericaN sales at 16.4%.
When it comes to WE STUDY the graph, we CAN see QUITE clearly that the shares started TO RISE from the beginning of the course in 1996, but it tumbled slightly in the mid of the following year, to reach 57%(.) then it peaked at 80% i(.) After that it had an unstable level of fluctuatING UNTIL 2000(.) Finally it followed by a little increaseD SLIGHTLY(,) ONLY TO ONCE AGAIN and a fall.
To sum up, we CAN figure out that there were some differences either in the Coca Cola share PRICE and in the sales(.) THEY differed substantially according to the county and the year.
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Not bad Sam. Remember, countries and company brand names need to be considered as Proper Nouns. As such, they MUST begin with a capital letter.
Kitos. 7.5/10
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