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The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart shows the proportion of Coca-Cola sold in five different countries in 2000, while the line graph describes the trend of share price for Coca-Cola between 1996 and 2001.
It is obvious that Americans consumed of more than a half of the total coke consumption, including 30.4 percent from North America and 25.7 from Latin America. On the contrary, Africa and Middle East only took up 7.0 percent of all the coke sold in 2000.
The price fluctuated during the period given, starting from $35 in 1996 and climbing to a little below $70 in the next year. Though the price fell to $60 at the end of 1997, it managed to increase to a peak of $80 in the mid-1998. Then the figures dropped gradually for two years, but rebounded to approximately $60 in 2001.
Overall, Western countries are responsible for most of the Coca-Cola consumption in 2000, and the price of coke fluctuated but peaked at the year 1998.
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