The advantage and disavantage of living in the 21st century

The life in 21St century has been a hotly-debated issue. There have appeared endless controversial attitude toward its benefit and harmfulness.
On the positive side, high living standard and intellectual development are what I put in my priority. In the 21st century, people are in advance of building suitable education system. Young children are taught in modern school with state-of-the-art facilities for not only knowledge improvement but also physical. Students are severed with worldwide libraries and labs and adroit teachers for researching and studying. Besides knowledge, well- strain physical and spirit also let them explore their own talents and inner strength. More interestingly, 21st century emphasizes itself by numerous discovery of universe and astronaut industry. People are able to know about planets outside the Earth, stars and how it impacts on our life as well. People even have likelihood to enjoy their honeymoon in the universe. With no doubt, high living standard is certain in 21st century, the century for almost impossible things turn to be true.
On the negative side, environmental destruction and troublous society are great challenges. For last few decades, forest have been axed more than 50 percent which now extends more and more, threat mankind’s life and animal as well. Oxygen is limited, the raising of flood and rushed down land, houses for animal are in danger. The globe warming, which causes the increases the rate of ocean level, now sets many areas into emergency situation. The pollution from industries and assembly lines put influence on neither water in river, the underground water nor air,land. More seriously, world is still belligerent, war has been occurred in some part of the world and class distinction. Many people have been suffering from unsafe life, lacking of the basis and filling of fear. The far distance between the rich and the poor takes away the fair and union of mankind becoming the most dangerous factor for domestic violence. Indeed there are the huge challenges for people to adjust so that they are able to continue living together.
In summary a coin has two sides, although 21st century offers high living standard and intellectual development, environmental destruction, troublous society need considering. People should surely take my writing into great consideration to have a feasible decision on their lives in 21st. We are the world, we are the champion.

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Your work is not yet legible enough to be considered as a good essay Hoanglinh. You need to do lots of reading to improve your knowledge and understanding of English writing.

Teacher could you tell me what kinds of sources should I refer to improve my English. Thanks you very much.

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