Television good effects are more than its negative effects, do you agree?

Television programs have countless influence on people in today’s world.some people believe that it has beneficial effect such as educational benefit while opponents claim that it influences people negatively by promoting voilence.

Firstly,action films and serials project too much voilence nowadays in television programs.It broadcasts the fighting scenes and immitation creates the impression of voilence and encourage people to use those acts what they see on t.v.Moreover,it influences kids in our society as they watch kids films and cartoons.

Incontrast,defenders claim that television has educational value.For example,it broadcast number of educational and vocational programs which benefits society .For instance,Seasame Street is an educational program which educate our kids while playing games.For adults,T.V programs runs alot of educational programs as IT related,cooking and other issues.

Furthermore,distance learning institutes presents education lessons on variety of subjects and T.V emerged as an effective media in disperse knowledge to their audience and public.One of the big example of it that National Graphic Channel which gives great information and knowledge about universe,earth ,weather and the living creatures of the world.

Television programs provides information about the different cultures,languages,food and people as well as latest trends going on in todays world.
To sum up,I believe that Television program has numerous educational and informative influence on people,but it also has a negative impact on society when they broadcast too much voilence.

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Television programs have countless influenceS on people in today’s world. Some people believe that it has beneficial effect such as educational benefit while opponents claim that it influences people negatively by promoting voilence.
Firstly, action films and serials project too much VIOLENCE nowadays in television programs. It broadcasts the fighting scenes and IMITATION FIGHTS CREATE the impression of VIOLENCE and encourage people to use those acts what they see on t.v. Moreover, it influences kids in our society as they watch kids films and cartoons.
In contrast, defenders claim that television has AN educational value. For example, it broadcastS A number of educational and vocational programs which benefits society. For instance, Seasame Street is an educational program which educateS our kids while playing games. For adults,T.V programs runs a lot of educational programs, SUCH as IT related,cooking and other issues.
Furthermore, distance learning institutes presents education lessons on A variety of subjects, and T.V emerged as an effective media in DISPENSING knowledge to their audience and public. One of the big exampleS of it that National Graphic Channel which gives great information and knowledge about universe, earth, weather and the living creatures of the world.
Television programs provides information about the different cultures, languages, food and people as well as THE latest trends going on in today’s world.

To sum up,I believe that television programMES HAVE numerous educational and informative influence on people, but it also has a negative impact on society when they broadcast too much VIOLENCE.
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Not a bad essay Sam. Two major problems though; NEVER say kids, always children.
The second is your punctuation. Absolutely wrong. Review the difference in my edit and your original.

Kitos. 8/10