As it goes without say, all requirements of each person must be responded in correct way; so that, the person can possibly be satisfied of his life. In other words, all needs are important and vital and none of them should be disregarded. In fact, you need a growth in mental aspects such as physical aspects. In my opinion, art, music, drama and so on are main requirements that must be trained.
A greatly significant way for being successful is that you can possibly recognize your talents. Due to the fact that, schools are the first and main place that you get a definition of yourself, they can help to discover talents in each student. Thus, all subjects must be taught together inasmuch as regarding to one group of lessons makes other groups not considered.
On the contrary, more and more people have an opposed idea. They believe that some special lessons are most important of others. So that they spend more time on these lessons and do not pay attention to all requirements identically.
To sum up, everyone knows engaging in only one issue in all aspects of life is not good and useful. Needless to say, you must discover your talent and attempt to burgeon it in the best way. Hence, all lessons are the same and must spend the identical time to them for getting the best conclusion.
TOEFL listening lectures: What does the professor imply about Leonardo da Vinci?
It goes without sayING, all requirements of each person must be responded TO in A correct way; so that the person can possibly be satisfied WITH his life. In other words, all needs are important and vital and none of them should be disregarded. In fact, you need a growth in mental aspects such as physical aspects. In my opinion, art, music, drama and so on are main requirements that must be trained LEARNED.
A greatly significant way for being TO BECOME successful is that you can possibly recognize your talents. Due to the fact that, schools are the first and main place that you get a definition of yourself, they can help to discover talents in each student. Thus, all subjects must be taught together inasmuch as regarding to one group of lessons makes other groups not considered.
On the contrary, more and more people have an opposed idea. They believe that some special lessons are MORE important THAN others(,) so that they spend more time on these lessons and do not pay attention to all requirements identically.
To sum up, everyone knows engaging in only one issue in all aspects of life is not good and useful. Needless to say, you must discover your talent and attempt to burgeon it in the best way. Hence, all lessons are the same and must spend the identical time to them for getting the best conclusion.
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Not bad Parisa, but you must learn to express yourself better.
Kitos. 7/10
thanks a lot Mr Kitosdad
I will try