Studying in history-literature or science-mathematics

Subject: Do you agree or disagree the following ststement? It is more important for students to study history and lirerature than it is for them to study science and mathemetics. Use specific reaons and examples to support your opinion.

It is important to study history and literature for students. Since both of them have a great impotrance for human life. For instance literature… It impresses our view point of life by its poets, tales, pictions, and so on… Who can say that “I read Tolstoy, and nothing has changed in my life”? Besides liretature, history has effects in our life too. It must be remind that if you wide from your history, you will be far away for your future. Despite the fact that it is more important for students to study sience and mathemetics.

First of all it should be discribed that what are the brach of sience? These are physics, chemistry, biology and mathemetics. Physics deals with matter. It asks the principles of the matter, and tries to explane it’s mechanic and elecromagnetizm. Chemistry takes in interest in characterise of elements. Whic elements make substances, which are methal, which are non-methal? Biology looks into the cell. What are the intergates of cell, how does it be comes together and creates the body? Mathemetics is the way of to explain the nature by using numbers. All in all nature talks us by the language of the science.
In all over the existence of human, he tries to find out the way of control the nature. It has begun with the invention of fire, and continued with the building of complex communication services; and goes on. Human achieves that by using science. Shortly development emanates from science.

By the way what are the incomes of technology? Technology not only makes our life easier, but also gives the power that has it. For example, when the Middle Age closed, Spanish and Portuguese sailors had begun to explore find new world. They shipped along to the oceans. They succeeded it by using compass and reinforced ships. Meanwhile compass has changed the ages and opened new era. Similarly if we come today USA is the most developed country all over the world. What does the fact beneath? It is the fact that inventions from all over in history, 80% of them have been designed by Americans.

As a consequence it can be said that both history, literature and science, math are important to study by students. Nevertheless science and math have more effects in our life. Science is a tongue, and math is an alphabet of the nature. So that studying in science and mathematics must be chosen by learners.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Comparative Religion

Subject: Do you agree or disagree WITH the following stAtement? It is more important for students to study history and LITERATURE than it is for them to study science and mathemAtics. Use specific reaSons and examples to support your opinion.

It is important to study history and literature for students. Since both of them have a great impotrance for human life. For instance literature… It impresses our view point of life by its poets, tales, pictions, and so on… Who can say that “I read Tolstoy, and nothing has changed in my life”? Besides liretature, history has effects in our life too. It must be remind that if you wide from your history, you will be far away for your future. Despite the fact that it is more important for students to study sience and mathemetics.

First of all it should be discribed that what are the brach of sience? These are physics, chemistry, biology and mathemetics. Physics deals with matter. It asks the principles of the matter, and tries to explane it’s mechanic and elecromagnetizm. Chemistry takes in interest in characterise of elements. Whic elements make substances, which are methal, which are non-methal? Biology looks into the cell. What are the intergates of cell, how does it be comes together and creates the body? Mathemetics is the way of to explain the nature by using numbers. All in all nature talks us by the language of the science.
In all over the existence of human, he tries to find out the way of control the nature. It has begun with the invention of fire, and continued with the building of complex communication services; and goes on. Human achieves that by using science. Shortly development emanates from science.

By the way what are the incomes of technology? Technology not only makes our life easier, but also gives the power that has it. For example, when the Middle Age closed, Spanish and Portuguese sailors had begun to explore find new world. They shipped along to the oceans. They succeeded it by using compass and reinforced ships. Meanwhile compass has changed the ages and opened new era. Similarly if we come today USA is the most developed country all over the world. What does the fact beneath? It is the fact that inventions from all over in history, 80% of them have been designed by Americans.

As a consequence it can be said that both history, literature and science, math are important to study by students. Nevertheless science and math have more effects in our life. Science is a tongue, and math is an alphabet of the nature. So that studying in science and mathematics must be chosen by learners.
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