Spot the mistakes, will you?

Dear teachers, experts, everyone in the know,

I’m addressing to you with a bold request to help me spot the mistakes in a test I was given on some site. I’m really upset about not getting the results, just points, you know, a score. I would prefer to work on my mistakes in order to avoid them in future, but that my work returned no result :frowning: How would I know what items I am weak at?
So if anybody is willing to give me a hand, send a signal, and I will upload the test with my answers underlined.

Thanks in advance.

Good morning Abeille. I will help. PM me your test questions.

Kitos.

Hi Abeille,

Let’s all see your test answers. It will help other users.

Alan

Just ask whatever you don’t know or aren’t sure of. Don’t be afraid to ask something as it’s how we learn. Here, the biggest problem is making replies. Before doing so, you must be quite sure that your answers are adequate. Hope you enjoy the forum.

Quite right Alan.

VW, has it ever occurred to you that you seem to be the only one we have asked several times to first think and then post your replies? On our forum we don’t have any ‘problems’. It is you might have some difficulty understand what all our moderators have been trying to tell you. If you want to continue this conversation, please do so here.[YSaerTTEW443543]

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Here’s the test itself and my [color=indigo]presumably right answers. Off we go!

Part 1

  1. Water {is to boil / is boiling / [color=indigo]boils} at 100C.

  2. In some countries {there is / is / [color=indigo]it is} very hot all the time.

  3. In cold countries people wear thick clothes {for keeping / [color=indigo]to keep / for to keep} warm.

  4. In England people are always talking about {a weather / [color=indigo]the weather / weather}.

  5. In some places {[color=indigo]it rains / there rains / it raining} almost every day.

  6. In deserts there isn`t {the / some / [color=indigo]any} grass.

  7. Places near the Equator have {a warm / the warm / [color=indigo]warm} weather even in the cold seasons.

  8. In England {coldest / [color=indigo]the coldest / colder} time of year is usually from December to February.

  9. {The most / Most of /[color=indigo]Most} people dont know what its like in other countries.

  10. Very {less / little / [color=indigo]few} people can travel abroad.

  11. Mohammed Ali {has won / [color=indigo]won / is winning} the first world title fight in 1960.

  12. After he {[color=indigo]had won / have won / was winning} an Olympic gold medal he became a professional boxer.

  13. His religious beliefs {have made him / made him to / [color=indigo]made him} change his name when he became champion.

  14. If he {has / would have / [color=indigo]had} lost his first fight with Sonny Liston, no one would have been surprised.

  15. He has travelled a lot {[color=indigo]both / and / or} as a boxer and a world-famous personality.

  16. He is very well known {all in / [color=indigo]all over / in all} the world.

  17. Many people {is believing / are believing / [color=indigo]believe} he was the greatest boxer of all time.

  18. To be the best {from / [color=indigo]in / of} the world is not easy.

  19. Like any top sportsman Ali {[color=indigo]had to / must / should} train very hard.

  20. Even though he has now lost his title, people {would / [color=indigo]will / did} always remember him as a champion.

Imagine that you are still living in the 20th century…

The history of {aeroplane / [color=indigo]the aeroplane / an aeroplane} is {[color=indigo]quite a / a quite / quite} short one. For many centuries men {are trying / try / [color=indigo]had tried} to fly, but with {[color=indigo]little / few / a little} success. In the 19th century a few people succeeded {to fly / [color=indigo]in flying / into flying} in balloons. But it wasnt until the beginning of {[b][color=indigo]this[/b] / next / that} century that anybody {were / is / [b][color=indigo]was[/b]} able to fly in a machine {who / [b][color=indigo]which[/b]/ what} was heavier than air, in other words, in {who/ which / [b][color=indigo]what[/b]} we now call a “plane”. The first people to achieve “powered flight” were the Wright brothers. {His / Their / [b][color=indigo]Theirs[/b]} was the machine which was the forerunner of the Jumbo jets and supersonic airliners that are {such / [b][color=indigo]such a[/b] / so} common sight today. They {[b][color=indigo]could[/b] / should / couldnt} hardly have imagined that in 1969, {[color=indigo]not much / not many / no much} more than half a century later, a man {will be / had been / [color=indigo]would be} landed on the moon. Already {a man / man / [color=indigo]the man} is taking the first steps towards the stars. Although space satellites have existed {since / during / [color=indigo]for} less than forty years, we are now dependent {from / of / [color=indigo]on} them for all kinds of {informations / [color=indigo]information / an information}. Not only {[color=indigo]are they / they are / there are} being used for scientific research in space, but also to see what kind of weather {[color=indigo]is coming / comes / coming}.
By 1998 there {would / must / [color=indigo]will} have been satellites in space for forty years and the “space superpowers” are planning to {[color=indigo]have / make / let} massive space stations built. When these {will be / are / [color=indigo]will} have been completed it will be the first time {when / where / [color=indigo]that} astronauts will be able to work in space in large numbers. {Apart / For / [color=indigo]Except} all that, in many ways the most remarkable flight {[color=indigo]of / above / at} all was {it / that / [color=indigo]that one} of the flying bicycle, which the world saw on television, {[color=indigo]flying / to fly / fly} across the channel from England to France, with nothing {apart / [color=indigo]but / than} a man to power it. As the bicycle-flyer said, “Its the first time {I realize / [b][color=indigo]Ive realized[/b] / I am realizing} what hard work is to be a bird!”

Part 2

  1. Many teachers {say to / [color=indigo]say / tell} their students should learn a foreign language.
  2. Learning a second language is not the same {[color=indigo]as / like / than} learning a first language.
  3. It takes {long time / long / [color=indigo]a long time} to learn any language.
  4. It is said that Chinese is perhaps the world`s {harder / [color=indigo]hardest / more hard} language to master.
  5. English is quite difficult because of all the exceptions {who / [color=indigo]which / what} have been to be learnt.
  6. You can learn the basic structures of a language quickly, but only if you {are wanting / will to / [color=indigo]are willing} to make an effort.
  7. A lot of people aren`t used {to the study / [color=indigo]to study / to studying} grammar in their own language.
  8. Many adult students of English wish they {would start / would have started / [color=indigo]had started} their language studies earlier.
  9. In some countries students have to spend a lot of time working {[color=indigo]on / by / in} their own.
  10. There aren`t {no / [color=indigo]any / some} easy ways of learning a foreign language in your own country.
  11. Some people try to improve their English by {hearing / listening / [color=indigo]listening to} the BBC World Service.
  12. {Live / Life / [color=indigo]Living} with a foreign family can be a good way to learn English.
  13. It`s no use {to try / trying / [color=indigo]in trying} to learn a language just by studying a dictionary.
  14. Many students of English {[color=indigo]would rather not / would rather prefer not / would rather not to} take tests.
  15. Some people think it`s time we all {learn / should learn / [color=indigo]learnt} a single international language.

Charles Walker is a teacher at a comprehensive school in Norwich. He {has joined / [color=indigo]joined / joins} the staff of the school in 1998 and {[color=indigo]has been working / worked / works} there ever since. Before {move / to move / [color=indigo]moving} to Norwich, he taught in Italy and in Wales, and before that he {has been / [color=indigo]was / was being} a student at Cambridge University. So far he {isnt / wasnt / [color=indigo]hasnt been[/b]} in Norwich for as long as he was in Wales, but he likes the city a lot and {should / [b][color=indigo]would[/b] / could} like to stay there for at least another two years, or, {how / which / [b][color=indigo]as[/b]} he puts it, until his two children {[b][color=indigo]have[/b] / will have / will be} grown up a bit. He met his wife, Kate, in 1982 while he {was to live / [b][color=indigo]was living[/b] / had been living} abroad for a while, and they got married in 1986. Their two children, Mark and Susan, {are / [b][color=indigo]were[/b] / have been} both born in Norwich. The Walkers boy, {[color=indigo]who / which / he} is four, has just started at nursery school, but {[color=indigo]his / their / her} sister {shall stay / stays / [color=indigo]will be staying} at home for another couple of years, because she is nearly two years {[color=indigo]younger / more young / the younger} than him. Charles and Kate Walker {are used / use / [color=indigo]used} to live in the country, but now that they have children, they {[color=indigo]have moved / move / moved} into the city. Charles wanted a house {next / [color=indigo]near / close} the school {in order / for / [color=indigo]to} get to work easily. Unfortunately {the / a / [color=indigo]that} one the two of them really wanted was too expensive, so they {must / should / [color=indigo]had to} buy one a bit further away. By the time the children {go / will go / [color=indigo]will have gone} to secondary school, {that / [color=indigo]which / what} Charles and Kate hope will be in Norwich, the Walkers {[color=indigo]will have been / have been / will be living} there for at least fifteen years. They cant be sure if they {[b][color=indigo]stay[/b] / do stay / will stay}, but if they {[b][color=indigo]dont / didnt / wont}, their friends won`t be too surprised.

  1. Johns coming to see you, {hasnt he / wasnt he / [b][color=indigo]isnt he[/b]}?
  2. Its been a long time since youve seen him, {hasnt it / [b][color=indigo]isnt it[/b] / haven`t you}?
  3. Hes due to arrive tomorrow, {wont he / [color=indigo]isn`t he / will he}?
  4. He wont be getting in till about 10.30, {isnt he / is he / [color=indigo]will he}?
  5. You met him while you were on holiday, {[b][color=indigo]didnt you[/b] / werent you / haven`t you}?
  6. I think Im expected to pick him up, {[b][color=indigo]arent I[/b] / don`t I / are you}?
  7. No doubt youd rather stayed in England now, {didnt you / [b][color=indigo]wouldnt you[/b] / shouldnt you}?
  8. Nobody else has been told he`s coming, {is he / has he / [color=indigo]have they}?
  9. Wed better not stay up too late at night, {didnt we / have we / [color=indigo]had we}?
  10. I suppose its time we called it a day, {didnt we / [b][color=indigo]isnt it[/b] / dont I}?

Gosh, that’s it!
Looking forward to your precious replies.

I think you’re completely correct.

Hello everybody!

Any suggestions yet?
I’m eager to know where I’m wrong.

Haven’t you seen my reply? You’re completely right. Just know that your work is too long for anyone to read it carefully.

Sorry my persistence, but I was returned [color=green]86 out of [color=darkblue]100. It suggested I must have made [color=red]14 errors. It led me here to ask for spotting them. I prefer to know my weak points. That’s it.

3.For keeping 18.of 20.next, which, man, must 57.to studying 63.trying 65.stays, in order, the, will stay, won’t 92.hasn’t it.
Omg. I’m exhausted. Maybe there’s still something wrong in my answers.

Hi Abeille,

My comments:

(1) Man (no article)
(2) Apart FROM all that (This seems to be a mistake in the text)
(3) That (not that one)
(4) 55. English is quite difficult because of all the exceptions {who / which / what} have been to be learnt. This is a mistake in the text. ‘Which’ is correct but the sentence should continue - have to be learnt.
(5) used to studying (not to study)
(6) It’s no use trying (not in trying)
(7) the one (not that one)
(8) go (not will go)
(9) will stay (not stay)

These are the mistakes I have spotted.

Hope that helps.

Alan

Thank you ever so much!

And what about this line
[color=indigo]92. Its been a long time since youve seen him, {hasnt it / isnt it / haven`t you}?
The answer should be hasn’t it?

I suppose it must be [color=green]will stay [color=darkred](not stay)?

[color=indigo]They cant be sure if they {stay / do stay / will stay}, but if they {dont / didnt / wont}, their friends wont be too surprised. [color=green]They cant be sure if they will stay, but if they [b]dont[/b], their friends wont be too surprised. - Right?

Hi Abeille,

Yes, about ‘stay’. Yes, about ‘hasn’t it ?’ Apologies for those.

Alan

Alan, hello again and thank you for being patient and nice to sift through my work. I now feel contented :slight_smile: and know my flaws.
Best regards,
Nathalie