【Some college and university students believe it is important to focus solely on their academic studies, while others see extracurricular activities such as clubs and sports as a valuable part of their educational experience. Which approach do you think is best? Use specific examples and details in your explanation.】
I think that university students focus on their academic study is more important than joining extracurricular activities. There are two reasons to support this. First of all, student time in life is the only moment that you can focus on study without worrying about other things such as raising the family or earning money. So we can put more time on studying to get academic knowledge. This would be very useful for a future job. Second, we need to pay more money to get academic learning and choices are limited if we are not university students. However, you can do extracurricular activities whatever the age you are. Therefore, I prefer university students should focus on their academic studies.
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