Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people

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Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people are always in hurry and some people wants to take their time. Even though Life is short many people want to do many things in short period of time to become successful, but I really don’t like to rush through situations. I like to take my own time to get things done. If we rush through situation it might be happen that the people will do some wrong decision. My examples and reason below will strengthen my points.

Admittedly, each and every person wants to become success in their life as early as possible. Especially new generation don’t want to wait, they want to thing done rapidly. My view is some what different. Considering student life, after certain period of time they needs to choose their master field in which they like to enter, such kind of situation need some time to think. If they rush through this thing they might take wrong decision of their life. Instead rush through things and take wrong decision, its better to take time and choose precise field rather than regret.

Secondly, although life is fast many people did so many things at the same time but this is not a true way to understand and face the things or situation. For example, one of my friends did many things at a time. when her baby crying, she just keep baby near her and did some work with laptop or talk on the phone. Same for in corporate life, if boss give you some work to done and tell to do n certain period of hour but at that night employees has their college football game on the TV he might complete that work as early as possible and if he did something wrong it might creates wrong impression on his boss. So never rush through the situation take your time but do it in right way.

Finally, life is short, enjoy it as per your attitude don’t rush through the situation. Another example is about stock market, some people are invest their money by reading reviews and looking at graph, even though its important but they should take their time to think and should read about company development, profile and productivity information etc before making any investment.

In conclusion, I think people should not rush through the situation they should take their own time in order to make precise decision.

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Hi kitosdad,
thank you so much for your help.
please grade my essay,
thanks in advance.

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people are always in hurry and some people WANT to take their time. Even though life is short many people want to do many things in A short period of time to become successful, but I really don’t like to rush through situations. I like to take my own time to get things done. If we rush through situationS it might JUST happen that thAT people will MAKE some wrong decision. My examples and reasonS below will strengthen my points.

Admittedly, each and every person wants to become A success in their life as early as possible. Especially THE new generation especially don’t want to wait(.) They want to SEE thingS BEING done rapidly. My view is (somewhat) different. Considering student life, after A certain period of time they NEED to choose their master field in which they WOULD like to enter(.) Such kindS of situationS need some time to think OVER. If they rush through this thing they might MAKE THE wrong decision of their life. Instead OF rushING through things and MAKING wrong decision, it’s better to take time and choose YOUR precise field rather than regret LATER.

Secondly, although life is fast many people DO so many things at the same time(,) but this is not a true way to understand and face the things or situation. For example, one of my friends did many things at THE SAME time. When her baby WAS crying, she just KEPT IT near her and did some work ON HER laptop or talkED on the phone.
THE same THING APPLIES in corporate life(.) If YOUR boss giveS you some work to DO and tellS YOU to do IT In A certain period of TIME, but that night employees haVE their college football game on the TV(,) he might complete that work as QUICKLY as possible(,) and if he did something wrong it might create THE wrong impression on his boss. So never rush through the situation(.) Take your time but do it in THE right way.

Finally, life is short, enjoy it as per your attitude AND don’t rush through the situation.
Another example CONCERNS THE stock market(.) Some people are investING their money by reading reviews and looking at graphS, even though its important but they should take their time to think(,) and THEY should read about THE company’S development, profile and productivity information etc,. before making any investment.

Finally, life is short, enjoy it as per your attitude AND don’t rush through the situation.

In conclusion, I think people should not rush through ANY situation(.) They should take their own time in order to make A precise decision.
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