Should we pay attention to the opinions of famous people?

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Essay:

The famous often draw the attentions to other people. People are interested in the capability of movie or sport stars, while someone cares about the appearance of the famous. So, how about their opinions, should we pay attention to them? Personally, I think we should not pay attention to the opinions of famous people for some reasons.

To begin with, the famous can be an expert at a particular area, but on the other hand, their opinions about other fields are not as good as we expect. For instance, when stating a view on education area, a football star with excellent playing skills just likes a normal person. So, if the ideas of famous people are not highly appreciated, why should we pay attention to them?

Moreover, we should not care about the opinions of the famous due to some ideas are not completely accurate. These opinions are stated with the personal purposes. Advertising program as an illustration, the celebrities are invited to express about new products. This can help celebrated people as well as the products draw more attention to the public. However, the problem is the quality of some products is not as perfect as they introduce. Therefore, believing in these ideas is not actually good for the people in general and the customers in particular.

In addition, people have a right to choose what opinions they care about. Around us, a lot of people frankly share their opinions that are simple but very helpful. For instance, if we have any trouble in the life, the neighbors, classmates or colleagues are the first people willingly give you good advice in order to help us overcome the trouble. Therefore, instead of paying attention to the famous, it is better for us to pay regard for the ideas of people besides us.

In conclusion, we should not pay attention to the opinions of famous people because the ideas that they give are not as entirely correct and good as we anticipate, and there are lot of helpful ideas of people around us. It may not be persuasive to all people; however, these factors lead me to believe this way.

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To begin with, the famous ARE NORMALLY expert’s at ONLY IN a particular area, but on the other hand, their opinions about other fields are not as good as we WOULD expect. For instance, when stating a view on education area, a football star with excellent playing skills IS just LIKE a normal person. So, if the IDEA THAT famous people are not highly /appreciated/QUALIFIED/, why should we pay attention to them?

Moreover, we should not care about the opinions of the famous due to THE FACT some OF THEIR ideas are not completely accurate. These opinions are stated BASED SOLELY ON THEIR with the personal purposes EXPERIENCE .

TAKE advertising programMES as an illustration EXAMPLE(.)
The celebrities are invited to express THEIR OPINIONS about new products. This can help celebrITIES people as well(,) as THEIR COMMENTS ON the products draw more attention to the public.
However, the problem is THAT the quality of some products is OFTEN not as /perfect/GOOD/ as they introduce SUGGEST. Therefore, believing in these ideas is not actually good for the people in general(,) NOR FOR the customers in particular.

In addition, people have a right to choose what WHOSE opinions they care about. Around us a lot of people frankly share their opinions that are simple but very helpful. For instance, if we have any trouble in life, the neighbors, classmates or colleagues are the first people READY TO give you good advice in order to help us overcome the trouble. Therefore, instead of paying attention to the famous, it is better for us to pay regard for the ideas of people /beside/AROUND us.

In conclusion, we should not pay attention to the opinions of famous people(,) because the ideas that they give are not as entirely correct OR AS good as we WOULD anticipate, and there are lotS of helpful ideas FROM people around us. THEY may not be persuasive to all people; however, these factors lead me to believe this way.
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