İn my opinion teenagers should work and earn money. I try to explain why do ı chose this.
First of all there are several sociological reasons. One of them is teenagers have got a lot of time and ıf they don’t work they waste their time. Unemployee teenagers go up and down on the street aimless.Time is important for each person and we shouldn’t waste our time. This years for teenagers very important for their life. Because they found their life, create a point of view at this time.And the other hand streets someteimes dangerous for teenagers. Rubbers, kidnapers, knife guys are waiting all the edge of the streets. Sometimes it can be dangerous for teenagers.
Secondly there are some psychological reasons. First of all they will be confident person.You can recognize yourself while you are working. And working makes people atractive and confident. Being a confident person at that time for teenagers more important.Beside they start to a carrier for their work life. They can try a lot of job opportunites and decide which one is okey for them. Early decision is the best decision in my opinion and making a decision at teenager time will be best.Otherwise they can earn their own money.They can use that money for their needs or save it for their educational targets.
Lastly economical reason. If higly percent of people work in a country that cause of increase the economical level of that country. Teenagers are the big part of cake and they shoul support the economy for their community.
İn conclusion ı support this idea “teenager should work while they are students”. I try to explain why they should work .
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First of all there are several sociological reasons. One of them is teenagers have got a lot of time and ıf they don’t work they waste their time. UnemployeD teenagers DRIVE up and down on the street aimlessLY.Time is important for each person and we shouldn’t waste our time. ThESE years for teenagers ARE very important for their FITURE life(,) because they WILL FIND their life, AND create a point of view at this time.And the ON THE other hand streets sometimes ARE dangerous for teenagers. RObbers, kidnapPers AND knife guys are waiting AT the ENDS of the streets. Sometimes it can be dangerous for teenagers.
Secondly there are some psychological reasons. First of all they will be A MORE confident person.You can recognize yourself while you are working. And w Working makes people atTractive and confident. Being a confident person at that time for teenagers IS VERYmore important. Beside they start to a carrier for their work life. They can try a lot of job opportunitIes and decide which one is OK for them. MAKING AN early decision TO WORK is the best decision in my opinion, and making a decision at teenage time will be best.Otherwise THIS WAY they can earn their own money.They can use that money for their needs or save it for their educational targets.
Lastly, AN economical reason. If A higH percentAGE of people work in a country that cause AN increase IN the economic level of that country. Teenagers are the bigGEST part of THIS cake and they shoulD support the economy OF their community.
İn conclusion (I) support this idea “teenagerS should work while they are students”. I try to explain why they should work .
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Good work Cihan. I’m sure you will progress very quickly if you keep posting work like this, and learning from reviewing your edited work.