Personally, I think your performance is comparable to that of Tony Benett’s. I’d say that you’d make a fine jazz singer. Your baritone voice has that…I don’t know how I should put it…mature tone. I love it!
I’d like to share with you one of my favorite songs, named you mean everything to me.
I hope it does not sound too bad.
YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME
(Neil Sedaka and Howie Greenfield)
You are the answer to my lonely prayer
You are an angel from above
I was so lonely till you came to me
With the wonder of your love
I don’t know how I ever lived before
You are my life, my destiny
Oh my darling, I love you so
You mean everything to me
If you should ever, ever go away
There would be lonely tears to cry
The sun above would never shine again
There would be teardrops in the sky
So hold me close and never let me go
And say our love will always be
Oh, my darling, I love you so
You mean everything to me
(You mean everything to me)
So hold me close and never let me go
And say our love will always be
Oh, my darling, I love you so
You mean everything to me
I really liked the way you sang the song. I think that if learners would just sing their faovourite English song at least 3x a day, pronounciation drill would be easier and more fun. Don’t you think?
Live for the day
Share every precious moment
And I’ll be there (I’ll be there)
I can’t wait until tomorrow
There’s so much that I have to see
Find the road that we must follow
DESTINY
Take my hand and lead me onward
Show me a world that is in my dreams
Be the light that’s always shinin’
Over me
'Cause I believe
That we must live for the day
Share every precious moment
This is the way we’ll be forever
We must live for the day
Treasure these special memories
and I’ll be there (I’ll be there)
For one by one the leaves are fallin’
One by one though the years go by
No one knows when winter’s callin’
for you and I
To say goodbye
And so we must live for the day
Share every precious moment
This is the way we’ll be forever
We must live for the day
Treasure these special memories
and I’ll be there (I’ll be there)
For you
I’ll be there
Someone to watch over you
I’ll be there
You’ll need my love
Take my hand
This is where I’ll always be
Take my heart
I’ll be here for you
Live
Share
We must live for the day
Share every precious moment
And I’ll be there
I’ll be there
For you
Hi Ari!
Nice attempt, you are born singer. I have to agree with you the rap is not suitable for improving the pronunciation skills as long as the text is not well censored.
My favourite singer is 50 cent (from the rappers) but I prefer not to sing any of his song right now
I think that your flow is nice and that this method will definitely suit you. However, I think that you need to work more on your [sh] /ʃ/ such as in :
[Share] /ʃæ®/
[Precious] /preʃəs/
[Show] /ʃəʊ/
You seem to replace the sound /ʃ/ in those words with /s/.
Practise some more by singing along the original song and check back with us as soon as you think that you have improved.
You are correct about picking a song for practice. Many of the rap songs indeed use poor grammar and most of them contains at least a hint of offensive words.
But when it comes to songs, I guess that we can’t protest. A song is a product of art and art itself is highly subjective. One could say that beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.
I hope that my song could somehow serves as a remedy for your broken heart ;-).
I don’t really have additional notes. Not that I can think of from your last performance.
Your speech is still accented, but it is not too great as to hinder casual conversation.
Speaking of which, if I may guess, do you come from somewhere in the Middle-East or Turkey?
Keep practicing and try to thin out your accent. Try to post and sing (if feel like it. If not then reading aloud would do just fine) some more after you practise. Or, you could sing one of the songs that has been posted in this thread.
Yes, I can understand you with little, if no effort at all. Being an accented speaker doesn’t have to mean that you are inaudible, you know? Many native speakers even find that accented English speech (accurate and fluent ones, of course) as pleasant.
If I were your teacher, I would give you 85 out of 100. Congratulations!
100 means that your speech is so native-like that people may not be able to guess where you come from just by listening to your speech.
Now, as a favour, please mark me as if you were my teacher.
Thank you, Youscream Icecream.
That’s just right. One of the effective ways of drilling pronuciation is to sing. Try to sing as many songs you like as as possible. Of course, try to follow the native singers’ pronunciation as much as possible.
I am not a vocalist but I will sing other songs if I have condition to do that. Playing guitar and singing was what I usually did in my free time. Unfortunately, I do not have much free time any more.
If you have any funny ideas about practicing English by singing songs, please share with everyone.
Take care.
JLTS
don’t ask me how it could be
sometimes it’s hard to believe
that in my lifetime i could find that someone
who can make me complete
you are the air that i breathe
i’d surely die if you leave
‘cause i have never felt this way ’ bout any girl like i feel for you
so this is what i’m gonna do
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
you are so special to me
your love is all that i need
and i’m gonna spend the rest of my life
loving you faithfully
this love i feel is so strong
with you my heart’s found a home
‘cause no one in this world could ever love me so tenderly
so you can best believe
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
my love for you won’t fade no never
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
and when i’m holding you close to me
i know all of my dreams have come true
wanna let you know how i feel
girl my love is for real
and i just wanna give it to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you to you
and when i’m holding you close to me
i know all of my dreams have come true
wanna let you know how i feel
girl my love is for real
and i just wanna give it to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
my love for you won’t fade no never
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
to you and i’m giving my heart to you
don’t ask me how it could be
sometimes it’s hard to believe
that in my lifetime i could find that someone
who can make me complete
you are the air that i breathe
i’d surely die if you leave
‘cause i have never felt this way ’ bout any girl like i feel for you
so this is what i’m gonna do
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
you are so special to me
your love is all that i need
and i’m gonna spend the rest of my life
loving you faithfully
this love i feel is so strong
with you my heart’s found a home
‘cause no one in this world could ever love me so tenderly
so you can best believe
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
my love for you won’t fade no never
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
and when i’m holding you close to me
i know all of my dreams have come true
wanna let you know how i feel
girl my love is for real
and i just wanna give it to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you to you
and when i’m holding you close to me
i know all of my dreams have come true
wanna let you know how i feel
girl my love is for real
and i just wanna give it to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
my love for you won’t fade no never
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
i’m giving you my heart forever
every beat of my heart says it’s true
i know we’ll always be together forever
you lovin’ me - me lovin’ you
and i’m giving you my heart to you
to you and i’m giving my heart to you
Your choice of song is really nice. Why don’t you try to sing, or read it aloud and post your performance here? It would be more helpful for your pronounciaton.
[Verse 1]
What you got if you ain’t got love
the kind that you just want to give away
It’s okay to open up
go ahead and let the light shine through
I know it’s hard on a rainy day
you want to shut the world out and just be left alone
But don’t run out on your faith
[Chorus]
'Cause sometimes that mountain you’ve been climbing is just a grain of sand
What you’ve been up there searching for
forever is in your hands
When you figure out love is all that matters after all
It sure makes everything else
seem so small
[Verse 2]
It’s so easy to get lost inside
a problem that seems so big at the time
it’s like a river thats so wide
it swallows you whole
While you sit around thinking about what you can’t change
and worrying about all the wrong things
time’s flying by
moving so fast
you better make it count 'cause you can’t get it back
[Chorus]
Sometimes that mountain you’ve been climbing is just a grain of sand
What you’ve been up there searching for
forever is in your hands
When you figure out love is all that matters after all
It sure makes everything else
Seem so small
Sometimes that mountain you’ve been climbing is just a grain of sand
What you’ve been up there searching for
forever is in your hands
When you figure out love is all that matters after all
It sure makes everything else
Oh it sure makes everything else
Seem so small
I’ve been living with a shadow overhead
I’ve been sleeping with a cloud above my bed
I’ve been lonely for so long
Trapped in the past, I just can’t seem to move on
I’ve been hiding all my hopes and dreams away
Just in case I ever need em again someday
I’ve been setting aside time
To clear a little space in the corners of my mind
All I want to do is find a way back into love
I can’t make it through without a way back into love
Oh oh oh
I’ve been watching but the stars refuse to shine
I’ve been searching but I just don’t see the signs
I know that it’s out there
There’s got to be something for my soul somewhere
I’ve been looking for someone to shed some light
Not somebody just to get me through the night
I could use some direction
And I’m open to your suggestions
All I want to do is find a way back into love
I can’t make it through without a way back into love
And if I open my heart again
I guess I’m hoping you’ll be there for me in the end
oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
There are moments when I don’t know if it’s real
Or if anybody feels the way I feel
I need inspiration
Not just another negotiation
All I want to do is find a way back into love
I can’t make it through without a way back into love
And if I open my heart to you
I’m hoping you’ll show me what to do
And if you help me to start again
You know that I’ll be there for you in the end
oh, oh, oh, oh, oh