sentence structure

Beeesneees · February 2, 2011, 7:01pm

I genuinly didn’t know the meaning of the words in total, E2!

Rosalina · February 3, 2011, 12:55am

Thank you all for replying:)
what i really mean is that can I rewrite each story of the English Grammer through stories and find some one to correct me .
your posts proves that I can’t express myself good and that disappointe me:(

Beeesneees · February 3, 2011, 7:22am

Hello Rosalina,

Don’t be disheartened. The posts have just drifted away from your original question and the thread has become cluttered. You expressed yourself well enough. Did you see what I wrote in message #5? Notice the last sentence for the answer to your question:

Beeesneees:

Hi Rosalina,

What you want to say seems to be perfectly clear and you don’t have to make all the changes suggested by E2 and Tofu, though if you want your message to be grammatically correct, there are some things that you will need to do.

Compare this post with your original post carefully. If you have any questions about any of the differences, please ask:

Hi everyone, I’m new here, and I’m very excited about the site and everything on it.
My English grammar is very bad and I have a lot of difficulties in writing, especially with sentence structure.
I find reviewing English grammar through stories to be a great tool, but I am wondering if it would be okay if I were to rewrite a story my own way and post it here so that someone can help with correcting my writing mistakes. I am not sure whether we are allowed to do so here.
Thank you very much for helping me.

By the way, to answer your question, it is permissible for you to post rewritten stories here, but because things are very busy at the moment the language coaches cannot guarantee that they will have the time to look at them and help - short excerpts from a story, rather than an entire story, might get better attention.