Sentence: From the article, it is difficult to assess the activity of Mr. X

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Hello everyone

I’d like to ask if the following sentence is correct:

From the article, it is difficult to assess the activity of Mr. X as the president of the bank.

The intended meaning is as follows: the reader has read the article and it is difficult for him/her to understand/say if the activity of Mr. X (he is the president of the bank) was successful or not.

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Then I would prefer,

From the article, it is difficult for readers to evaluate the activity of Mr. X, the president of the bank, as successful or not.

3

Haihao, thank you very much for your suggestion.