Saving money for future or spending money on vacation?

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Please check my essay! Thanks a lot in advance, Mr. Kitos!

I prefer to save money for my later life rather than spending all my money on traveling and vacation. This is because if I save my money today, I can spend it later in cases I need money to spend on, especially in important or urgent circumstances.

Admittedly, there is an old saying that states, “You cannot bring your money when you die”. It is definitely true, since when you die, you leave every tangible thing–your assets, your properties, and so on-- behind you. Hence, some people assert that they should spend their money whenever they can, provided it will make them happy. In other words, they think money should be spent on things that bring them happy-- traveling and vacation, for example. In addition, they argue that nobody can predict how their lives in the future will be; maybe on tomorrow, you will die; therefore, you will not have more chance to enjoy their monetary pleasures. For these reasons, they crave for spending money on the things that could bring them satisfactions.

However, saving money is more important to me. Honestly, my family is not rich, and we have a lot of things to do. Those things are quite common such as paying my tuition fees and other living expenses, building my house, not to mention contingent expenses: hospital fees, medicines, and injuries later in life. If I spend all the money I have on vacation and traveling, it would be very difficult for me in the future. Otherwise, with a great deal of money in my saving account, not only can I use it whenever I want, but I can get benefit from it, thanks to its compound interest. My life will also be easier and more comfortable when I get older. For instance, I can have money to help my children to buy a new house, and spend on my pleasure things like caring pets, fishing, or gardening. Thus, I reckon that saving money today is investing money for the future.

In conclusion, I think people should focus on what really matters right now and spend their money wisely, so that they can enjoy their lives in the present and in the future.

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Please check my essay! Thanks a lot in advance, Mr. Kitos!

I prefer to save money for my later life rather than spending IT all my money on traveling and vacationS. This is because if I save my money today, I can spend it later in SITUATIONS WHERE I REALLY NEED IT.cases I need money to spend on, especially in important or urgent circumstances.

Admittedly, There is an old saying that states, “You cannot TAKE your money WITH YOU when you die”. It is definitely true, since when you die, you leave every tangible thing–your assets, your properties, and so on-- behind you. Hence, some people assert that they should spend their money whenever WHILE they can, provided it will make them happy. In other words, they think money should be spent on things that bring them happINESS-- travelLing and vacationS, for example. In addition, they argue that nobody can predict how their lives in the future will be; maybe on tomorrow, you will die; therefore, THEY will not have more ANY chance to enjoy their monetary pleasures. For these reasons, they crave for spending money on the things that could bring them satisfaction.

However, saving money is more important to me. Honestly, my family is not rich, and we have a lot of things to do. Those things are quite common such as paying my tuition fees and other living expenses, building my house, not to mention contingent expenses: hospital fees, medicines, and injuries later in life. If I spend all the money I have on vacationS and traveLling, it Could be very difficult for me in the future. Otherwise, with a great deal of money in my saving account, not only can I use it whenever I want, but I can get benefit from it, thanks to its compound interest. My life will also be easier and more comfortable when I BECOME older. For instance, I can have money to help my children to buy a new house, and spend it on my pleasurABLE things like caring pets, fishing, or gardening. Thus, I reckon that saving money today is investing money for the future.

In conclusion, I think people should focus on what really matters right now and spend their money wisely, so that they can enjoy their lives in the present and in the future.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Good morning little Louisa. In spite of my changes this is a very good essay.

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You are a very kind grandpa, Mr.Kitosdad! ^^
Louisa.

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I think it better to enjoy my money when I save my money for the future. Many people like to save they money because When they save money now then they can buy anything in the future and all money do they have then they must works for earn money. This essay will further discuss my opinion giving three reason
First reason is that Many people save they money for buy anything in the future but they must works and they works for childen and comfortable life, I think I should save my money now a days for the future and I can do anything for life and I don’t beg for my parent
Second reason is that In Thailand the king of thai make project “Sufficient economy” cause ,any people in Thailand know how to save they money. So I think I don’t worry about my money because When I earn money from work and half money I keep in piggy bank. Of course, I will be very comfortable life and I can do or buy anything I want
Third reason is that Nowadays, money helps many essential factors to live because we can’t do anything without money. For more comfortable, it gives energy to live anywhere in the word. Furthermore, I would prefer to save our money , it is better to use in our life in future such as critical situations, children education, emergency hospital