Run-On Sentences

Each of the following is a run-on . Correct the run-on and identify the different types of clauses or phrases in each sentence.

1- Although they are more likely the forerunners of tomorrow’s cars electric cars cannot compete in today’s market.

Answer:
Although they are more likely, the forerunners of tomorrow’s cars electric cars cannot compete in today’s market.

Although they are more likely: A dependent Clause.
the forerunners of tomorrow’s cars electric cars cannot compete in today’s market: An Independent Clause.

2-Due to the sudden increase in demand prices rose sharply.

Answer:
Due to the sudden increase in demand, prices rose sharply.
Due to the sudden increase in demand: A dependent clause.
prices rose sharply: An independent clause.

3-There is a widespread but apparently wrong belief that people are more likely to commit suicide in December.

Answer:
There is a widespread, but apparently wrong belief that, people are more likely to commit suicide in December.
There is a widespread: An independent clause.
People are more likely to commit suicide in December: An independent clause.

1- The man screamed loudly however no one approached him with offers of help.

Answer:
The man screamed loudly;however, no one approached him without offers of help.
The man screamed loudly: An independent clause.
no one approached him without offers to help: An independent clause.

Can you check my answers, please?

1- Although they are more likely the forerunners of tomorrow’s cars, electric cars cannot compete in today’s market.

2-Due to the sudden increase in demand, prices rose sharply.
Due to the sudden increase in demand: A prepositional phrase
prices rose sharply: An independent clause.

3-There is a widespread, but apparently wrong, belief that people are more likely to commit suicide in December. – Note: the commas are unnecessary and better omitted completely.

The last sentence is OK as you have answered it.

I can’t answer these ones, can you help me explaining them for me, please?

1- The first state to ratify the US institution Delaware is rich in country.
I can answer it this way:
The first state to ratify the US institution, Delaware, is rich in country.
but I can’t identify the type of clause/phrase for the first sentence:
The first state to ratify the US institution.
Is it an infinitive phrase? (to ratify)

2- Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease he developed a polio.

The question is under the same request (Correct the run-on)

Number ( 2 ) Can I answer it this way?

  • Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease and developed a polio.
    Or/ Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease, and developed a polio.

Which one is correct?
When we have the same subject but different verbs should we use a comma before the co-ordinating conjunction (and)?

  • Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease. He developed a polio.
  • Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease; He developed a polio.

1- The first state to ratify the US institution Delaware is rich in country.-- This makes no sense no matter how you dissect it: ‘rich in country’ has no meaning for me.

2- Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease: he developed a polio vaccine.
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Can you tell me please why you used (:slight_smile: here after the independent clause?

The second clause explains the first. That is the main use of the colon.

Each of the following is a run-on . Correct the run-on and identify the different types of clauses or phrases in each sentence:-

[color=red][b]1. If you are not well you don’t have to do the work.
[color=black]If you are not well, you don’t have to work.
. If you are not well: A dependent Clause.
. you don’t have to work: An independent clause.

[color=red]2. I didn’t know which job I wanted I was too confused to decide.
[color=black]I didn’t know which job I wanted. I was too confused to decide.
Or/
I didn’t know which job I wanted; I was too confused to decide.
Both of them are independent clauses.

[color=red]3. Doctors are concerned about the rising death rate from asthma therefore they have called for more research into its causes.
[color=black]Doctors are concerned about the rising death rate from asthma; therefore, they have called for more research into its causes.
Both of them are independent clauses.

[color=red]4. Before arriving at the station the old train caught fire.
[color=black]Before arriving at the station, the old train caught fire.

Before arriving: A prepositional phrase.

the old train caught fire: An independent clause.

[color=red]5. The first state to ratify the US institution Delaware is rich in history.
[color=black]The first state to ratify the US institution, Delaware, is rich in history.

The first state to ratify the US institution: A part of the independent clause.

Delaware: An appositive.

is rich in history: The rest of the independent clause.

[color=red]6. Allowing his men to make important decisions Jack fostered a spirit of togetherness among his men.
[color=black]Allowing his men to make important decisions, Jack fostered a spirit of togetherness among his men.

. Allowing his men: A participle phrase.

Jack fostered a spirit of togetherness among his men: An independent clause.

[color=red]7. Although the milky way looks like a dim cloud it is actually a huge galaxy.
[color=black]Although the milky way looks like a dim cloud, it is actually a huge galaxy.

. Although the milky way looks like a dim cloud: A dependent clause.

. it is actually a huge galaxy: An independent clause.

[color=red]8. Great Britain which is now an island was once part of the European mainland.
[color=black]Great Britian, which is now an island, was once part of the European mainland.

. Great Britian: Part of the independent clause.

. which is now an island: Dependent Clause.

. was once part of the European mainland: The rest of the independent clause.

[color=red]9. His salary is enormous however most fans think he is worth it.
[color=black]His salary is enormous; however, most fans think he is worth it.
. Both of them are independent clauses.

[color=red]10. Until cable TV was invented many viewers could not get a clear reception on their sets.
Until cable TV was invented, many viewers could not get a clear reception on their sets.

[color=black]. Until cable TV was was invented: Dependent Clause.

. many viewers could not get a clear reception on their sets: Independent Clause.

[color=red]11. Because it will be repaired Stacy pool will be closed for a week.
[color=black]Because it will be repaired, Stacy Pool will be closed for a week.

. Because it will be repaired: Dependent Clause.

. Stacy Pool will be closed for a week: Independent Clause.

[color=red]12. Before finishing this I will call Jim.
[color=black]Before finishing this, I will call Jim.

Before finishing: A prespositional Phrase.

I will call Jim: Independent Clause.

[color=red]13. There were several unusual hairstyles at the party one woman had green hair.
[color=black]There were several unusual hairstyles at the party: one woman had green hair.
I can’t identify the types of the sentences, except that one woman had green hair is independent clause, is the other also independent?

[color=red]14. There is a widespread but apparently wrong belief that people are more likely to commit suicide in December.
[color=black]I can’t solve this one.

[color=red]15. We will take our decision then we will let you know.
[color=black]We will take our decision, then we will let you know.
Are the two independent clauses.

[color=red]16. Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease he developed a polio.
[color=black]Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease. He developed a polio.
Or/
Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease; He developed a polio.
. Both of them are independent clause.

[color=red]17. However his negligence should not be disregarded.
[color=black]However, his negligence should not be disregarded.
his negligence should not be disregarded.: Independent Clause.

[color=red]18. During that time period many buyers preferred big cars.
[color=black]During that time period, many buyers preferred big cars.
I am not sure about this.

[color=red]19. Recently released the report was shocking.
[color=black]Recently released, the report was shocking.

. Recently released: A participle phrase.

. the report was shocking: Independent Clause.

[color=red]20. We read the letter we received yesterday our colleagues reviewed it thoroughly.
[color=black]We read the letter we received yesterday. our colleagues reviewed it thoroughly.
Or/
We read the letter we received yesterday; our colleagues reviewed it thoroughly.
. Both are independent clauses.

[color=red]21. Suzie believed but couldn’t confirm that Billy had feelings for her
[color=black]Suzie believed, but couldn’t confirm that Billy had feelings for her.
but couldn’t confirm that Billy had feelings for her: Independent Clause.
I am not sure about this.

[color=red]22. According to one of his biographers he completed a medical degree in Munich.
[color=black]According to one of the biographers: he completed a medical degree in Munich.
I am not sure about it,and I can’t identify the type of the first one, but the 2nd one is Independent Clause.

[color=red]23. In view of the extraordinary good results it was decided to try this technique again.
[color=black]In view of the extraordinary good results: it was decided to try this technique again.
I am not sure about this one as well.[/b]

[color=blue]That’s all…

Thanks.

  1. OK

  2. OK

  3. OK

  4. OK

  5. The first state to ratify the US constitution, Delaware is rich in history.
    The first state to ratify the US institution: appositive phrase.
    Delaware is rich in history: independent clause.

  6. Allowing his men.…decisions: A participle phrase.
    Jack fostered a spirit of togetherness among his men: An independent clause.

  7. OK

  8. OK

  9. OK

  10. OK

  11. OK

  12. OK

  13. I can’t identify the types of the sentences, except that one woman had green hair is independent clause, is the other also independent?-- Yes.

  14. There is a widespread but apparently wrong belief that people are more likely to commit suicide in December. I can’t solve this one.-- Commas can be placed before and after ‘but apparently wrong’, but they are not really necessary.

  15. We will take our decision; then we will let you know.
    Are two independent clauses.

  16. Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease. He developed a polio.
    Or/
    Jonas Salk defeated a terrible disease: he developed a polio.
    Both of them are independent clauses.

  17. However, his negligence should not be disregarded.: Independent Clause.

  18. During that time period, many buyers preferred big cars.
    I am not sure about this.– Prepositional phrase + independent clause.

  19. OK

  20. OK

  21. Suzie believed but couldn’t confirm that Billy had feelings for her.
    I am not sure about this.-- The only reasonable way to handle this is to omit commas and consider it a single independent clause with a compound verb.

  22. According to one of his biographers, he completed a medical degree in Munich. – Prepositional phrase + independent clause.

  23. In view of the extraordinary good results it was decided to try this technique again.
    In view of the extraordinary good results, it was decided to try this technique again.
    I am not sure about this one as well.– same as for #22.