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It is important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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TOEFL listening discussions: Why must the young woman leave?

Hi, this structure is much better than your last essay. Unfortunately, I think your grammar is worse - there are a lot of mistakes. I think I would rate this essay a 3 out of 5 too - sorry!